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by Otavol on Mon Jun 08, 2009 11:00 pm
Alright, well after responding to most of the other topics in this particular forum, I figure why not contribute something you know?
So here is something I wrote a couple weeks back, for my girlfriend.
Criticism or anything else is welcomed and appreciated.
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Live for Tomorrow
What time is it
How many days have passed
Oh, who really cares
We can make this last
You and I share this ever beating heart
Growing and glowing right from the start
All of our hopes and all of our dreams
Can never be torn apart
Hey, hey you
Look up at the stars and stare at the moon
Hey, I love you
Keep calling my name and I'll come searching for you
Hey, It's true
That every smile on my face was created by you
Keep looking ahead 'cause the future is new
I promise you love that I'll meet you there soon
Your face is a beacon
That keeps me ashore
I could love you forever
And then love you some more
Run off ahead but stay within sight
I need you to stay to guide with your light
A warmth without measure
A spark from a touch
Nothing exists
Oh, nothing but us
Hey, hey you
Look up at the stars and stare at the moon
Hey, I love you
Keep calling my name and I'll come searching for you
Hey, It's true
That every smile on my face was created by you
Keep looking ahead 'cause the future is new
I promise you love that I'll meet you there soon
I'll live with you
Die with you
Sleep with you
Cry with you
Do every single thing I can try with you
So come to me
Live with me
Run with me
Laugh with me
What time is it
How many days will pass
I'm not sure but we'll sure have a blast
And we watched the plumes paint the sky gray
As she laughed and danced through the field of graves
There I knew it would be alright
That everything would be alright
Would be alright
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