All humans sin... But you do it more often then most don't you?



Do you have any regrets? Any at all for hurting the people you did?



Would you change? If your life was reset would you be a better person?



I don't know... But let's find out together...



Plot:

You are a person guilty of bringing harm and suffering mentally, physically, or emotionally to many people and maybe even yourself. What does this mean? Well nothing much when your alive... You might go to jail or simply be lonely and long for change. But what happens when you die? Your sins are not enough to send you to Hell... But no way your going to Heaven with THAT load... Besides your way too young to be dead just yet... But don't worry there's a place for you... A place commonly referred to as Limbo. Limbo is a place not in Heaven, not in Hell and not in Earth. So where is it? It's everywhere and no-where. When you awake in Limbo you will find yourself in a large impressive looking mansion. Outside all there is too see for miles and miles is a maze... A rose maze. The world of Limbo in a sense is one big maze. Within it there are others like you who each have there own sin's weighing them down. As you all learn about each other and interact you will find the possibility for change within yourself. And the more you change the more maze outside will change. Until all of you are bettered men and woman only then will you find that the maze is gone... Replaced only with a path. Whether it leads back to life or to eternal peace is up to you and your decisions. But until that day comes. Hello and welcome to Limbo.


Limbo and the maze:

Allow me to clarify a little if your confused. You are a sinner of sorts who has recently died. And because of the nature of your sin's or sin and your age you have been granted a second chance. This second chance takes place in Limbo a place not in Heaven, Hell, or Earth. In limbo you will live in a large mansion like house suited for all your still present earthly needs along with this you will find various other people each with there own sins or sin. By interacting with the people and world around you are given the chance to change who you were and to better yourself as a person. By doing this you in a way are granted forgiveness for the pain you've caused others in the past. As you change and better yourself you will find that the maze of roses outside blocking your path. The maze is in a way un-passable leading only to more maze, dead ends or maybe little resting spots but never an exit. But the more you and the others change for the better the simpler the maze will become... Until all that is left is a path formed by roses. If you so chose it may take you back to your body on Earth where you can enjoy the gift of life... Or you can chose to accept death and be accepted into paradise. Where you end up is up to you... (Note: Your character will know very well whats going on because before they awake in Limbo a voice will arrive to them after they "die" and tell them what is to happen.)

Nature of my sin:

If your still unsure of what sin to make your character guilty of fret no more I will throw out some ideas but really sky is the limit if you find away to show your character has harmed others or themselves bad enough to earn there time in Limbo go for it. Now here's some ideas. You can make your character a player, a heart breaker, a bully, a person who judges others to the point of hurting them, a liar and many others. If you want you can also make them someone who hurt themselves in a way. I personal plan on making a character who turns to suicide and hurts other in this way by neglecting to see how much they tried. As there are many more possibility's I expect to see CREATIVE characters who can each bring there view point into the story and plot.

Making my character:

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((If you wish you may have multiple characters but no more then 2... P.S: you were probably confused about the meaning of the pictures at the begining but after reading the plot they should maybe make more sense as to there meaning with the story... ))