Double Gender Jeopardy

[JayZeroSnake]

Yeah, I'm afraid Zeke doesn't get hit at all, Tyler just threw a punch and missed, dude.

And he was trying to be nice to her. Plus, when she first met him, she just jumped to conclusions and started getting hostile.

[wolf1911.45]

Ok she missed and Tyler was just ticked off about "picking fights about her bosom.." and she lost it and became violent

[wolf1911.45]

When so the classes start

[JayZeroSnake]

I've gotten a little note to me that says the RP is going pretty fast. Not as much the posting as the speed of the story itself, people rushing through things and trying to start relationships instantaneously.

PLEASE. Just take your time when writing your posts. Anything besides just going around flirting and talking about how great somebody's breasts are or not. You could feature some of their thoughts, bits of their past, and how being a Flicker affected them then, and how it does in the present day at the island high school. You could write transformation sequences more majorly: have more NPC's in the area maybe, or put obstacles in the characters way as they're in the middle of the changing process, trying dearly not to get caught, and creating some actual conflict with a couple of them them having the ability to change into another gender. This can apply to all Types, because their transformations are still in public, whether they be random, activated by a certain thing or event, or willed: You MUST find a place to wait it out.

To a careful degree, you can even describe the changes that occur when they change, rather than "Poof!, I'm a chick/dude! :D"

(Ex. As he ran through the hallway, his could feel his normally rough skin turning soft and smooth, the area between his legs, down by his thighs felt slightly emptier, a small, cold, yet soft feeling emerging. There was a growing feeling in his chest, at first a a burning sensation as if he'd exercised too much, before gaining a tight feeling, as something inside began to push outwards. His short hair was quickly driving down into locks of long, silky gold as he finally dashed into the girls' bathroom, frantically locking the door as he awaited the final changes into a 'she.')

Also, take the time to actually develop characters and their relationships with the others. Don't just try to start romance right away, or it's pretty much over, no cool story at all.

PLEASE. This is for the sake of the RP and its' plot.

[TornZero]

Okay, I really hope I'm not the only one getting at least lightly annoyed by this. It should be pretty obvious, just read what I believe makes up half of the posts (if not more) now. (I'm sure DragonWriter knows what I'm talking about.)

[DragonWriter]

Where is your character in the role play Torn Zero? I can see if I can find it and give you something to do with mine. The one thing I don't like about role plays I've found on this site alone is that people leave the character tags blank and do not tag their characters so that people can maybe look at their profiles and say, "Oh, your character was at Point B doing action X."