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Um... I just think I should post my character's intro here...
Character Name: Brian
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Physical Description: has high cheek bones, blonde hair, and a strange eye in his chest and tentacles that come put of his back.
Description: Brian was once a normal teenage boy... once. Now has an eye in his chest that is a parasitic alien that increases his IQ, strength, and gives him tentacles that come out of his back.
And...
Name: To correctly pronounce it, your tongue must be cut out. English translation: Krischovük (Kris for short)
Age: 43,972.4 earth years
Gender: Male...?
Species: Alien of some sort
Physical Description: An alien eye. His pupil is a green slit. The whites of his eye/body are yellow. His blood is blue. He has six scarlet tentacles.
Description: A parasitic alien that lives in Brian's chest. He enhances Brian's strength and IQ, and allows Brian to use his six tentacles that come out of Brian's back. His pupil can fire a ray of green light, and also functions as a mouth. Can also turn Brian into basically a werewolf on command.
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"Are you sure this is the right way, Kris?"
"Of course I am. When have I ever led you astray?"
"Well, stealing this space ship WAS your idea."
"Dont worry, we'll be seen as heroes when we return. I mean, we discovered life on Mars and two other planets."
"Fine... but I don't think we're anywhere near Earth now."
"Look, a planet! That's our key to getting back!"
"You sure about that?"
"Does this eye look unsure to you?"
"It's kinda hard to tell... you're only an eye. When we get down there, pull in the tentacles, don't use me to talk, especially not in your voice, and I'm putting a shirt on." With that, the alien began to pilot the spacecraft to the ground.