Write it again. A smile creeping across his lips as he began to follow her to the galley. Incomplete sentence. Could have been complete if the word was 'Crept' His viridian eyes inspecting the walls of the quiet abode. Incomplete sentence. Could have been complete if the word was 'Inspected' His eb...
First off, please don't quote my post. It's not needed. I know what I wrote. You know what I wrote. He took the wallet into his hands. Its burgundy coloring faded from use over the years. The second sentence is not a complete sentence. They should be combined, or the second one should be turned int...
Kirie stared up at the purple sky, her own eyes mirroring the color naturally. She smiled a bit, watching the bird-like animals fly from tree to tree. This was her home, Legerdemain Forest. For miles in every direction this forest spread, its brightly colored trees and bushes giving homes to the str...
Margeret stared for a moment, knowing that her husband was in danger.. hoping that he wouldn't take this too far. Though she was a tough woman... she was still a woman after all and had fears and worries and concerns. The dark man, whom she so very much wanted to punch in the face right now, had ins...
'Cause you people got me in the mood.... http://a732.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/76/l_fd6604f94729016e382f7802fdf3b653.jpg Happy Christmas. http://a922.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/60/l_f561644c2548c2f5650040ac2a39c421.jpg What? Me? Plotting something? Never! http://a803.ac-images.myspace...
Allright... You guys win. http://i14.tinypic.com/725ow2w.jpg Me and my husband. http://i11.tinypic.com/8bz3n1k.jpg Another one of us. http://i18.tinypic.com/6o5yavp.jpg Kinda old, but still somewhat right... http://i1.tinypic.com/733dwfk.jpg Another kinda old one... but I love it dearly. http://phot...
The door swung open, allowing entrance to a dark figure. Margeret felt the hair on the back of her neck raise as she caught a glimpse of his face, causing cold fear to trickle down her spine. She tried to pull her gaze away, but was petrified. His voice broke the spell as he called out from the bar....
It's not really advice. You really do need to click that button on the top of the screen that says [NEW MESSAGES] and read the one from the staff members.
From behind the counter, Margeret Becker peered out the window as the sand blew lightly against it, the grains hitting glass with little clicks. Those monotonous clicks. All day, every day. All night, every night. That was what she got for being so far out on the outskirts of the town. But then agai...