I think Polka meant Jack and typed Lee by accident, out of... habit? Anyway, working on a post, at the moment. EDIT: Hey, you guys, I have a question. So, I'm working on a post, and it's significantly longer than anything I've written for this thread. ... Like 800 words. Should I split it into two p...
' Maybe we should head off my friend, we need to catch our team mates... separation is not a good thing right now. ā Nethania said as she turned to look at the direction Trev-Lia and Jenna were in. The sound of screaming echoed from further down the path, but it seemed to damper as it grew closer t...
I don't know, Flick, I enjoyed it. I didn't put the two together. When Chex mentioned the bite wound, I was like "Oh yeah! Lightbulb!" But I never put together that Roderick could actually be a werewolf. I just thought he might have a really bad hand infection... That would soon infest his...
Jack highly doubted the rest of the party would completely alienate Nethania because she was a Half Elf; if not because they werenāt used to Osarian ways, but because Nethania didnāt seem any different than most elves. Except for the fact that Nethania was a little more accepting of humansā¦ well, ma...
Oh, Nethaniaā¦ Jack thought, remembering what heād seen in the void. The fading lights were blocking the figures, and something made him forget. It mustāve been the voice, it mustāve screwed with my mind. But now he was certain he knew what he had seen. Jack turned to Trev-Lia and Jenna, and said, ā...
I agree with Saf and Polka, Flik. I really enjoy reading your writing, Roderick's a very... interesting character. But, because you mentioned it, I'm gonna pay more attention to your writing from now on... if necessary. And, Polka, I kinda agree with Flik about the pacing... But, it makes me want to...
@Polka: Hey, yeah, I think that could work. I would just have to edit my last post so that Jack could see like distant figures our something in the void. But, yeah, that could work.
-Somewhereā¦- It was all so beautiful, and relaxing. Jack awoke in what appeared to be a glass cube floating in a void of fading blue lights. The only thing about this cube that was familiar was the blue mist that hung around his heels. Even though he was conscious for only a matter of minutes, it f...
Okay, s'all good. . I tried to take as little control of Nethania, except for the important things... so, yeah. Yay weekend!!! Time to sleep and turn my brain... off... sort of.
'Jack would you spell be more powerful if you had more time to charge it... I could put a barrier around us, but that would mean the other two would be left unprotected.ā Nethania was right, and Jack knew it... he just wasnāt sure how much his body could take. That one time on the ship left him unc...
'Thank you, but I am merely here to heal you Jack... that's all am worth to a human, its always been that way.ā See, she knowsā¦ that elf, she knows. Thatās why sheās being so cold to you. Noā¦ no, no, no, thatās not it. Sheās just having a bad day. That thing with Roderick really seemed to mess her u...
Oh! Sorry. We're in the same group, so I figured that Jack would talk to her? I'll edit it out. Yeah, I just re-read your post, Saf, and Jack and Nethania are both in the center? EDIT: I just realized Polka is away, so Nethania is a vertual NPC for now. I'll edit my post, I just can't at the moment....
Angry slowly began to well up inside him, and Jack didnāt know what to do. He wasnāt used to getting angry; heād always been able to find some way to calm himself down. But nowā¦ Roderick seemed out of control. Assuming that Jack merely wanted to show off his power? Bullshitā¦ complete, bullshit. It f...
So, that little "Things To Come" thing reminded me of a "Next Time On..." type thing on a television show. I have to say, I'd keep it on the channel. I like how this is turning out. I started playing this game Dragon Age: Origins, and it's a dark fantasy somewhat like this. And, ...
Oh okay. Then you did a very good job then. Lol. It seems like a Twilight Zone type of thing. "It was like I woke up and everyone had a pig face and looked pretty and everyone hated me because they thought that the PIG FACE was PREETTTTTTTYYYY!!!" I just wanted to clear that up, thank you ...
XD Bleed gas HAHAHAHHAHA! Sorry, I don't know why I find that so funny. I feel really bad for Nethania and Roderick now. Roderick's going crazy, and Nethania is lonely :(. Hugs for both of them!! Now, I'm a little confused, does Roderick know the captain's an imposter, and he's just against it? Or i...
Cause when I was making the character, I was thinking of having him as a demolitions expert, so I thought "demolitions =? big flashy magic". And.... all that "different, unique" stuff... exactly what I was thining .