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Re: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!

(is there anyone else? I see views but only one reply. Feedback and critique is the only reason I'm putting this up here!) Chapter 6- Withdrawal Out on the field past the forest, Harken was absolutely furious. “Over two hundred and fifty casualties?!” He raised a tightly clenched fist at a cowering ...
by WalterF
on Wed May 08, 2013 4:46 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!
Replies: 4
Views: 434

Re: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!

Chapter 4- Advancements The next day, clear skies gave Supernal and Celeste the ability to beat down on all who were under them. The heat was energy draining, but the adrenaline of battle was flowing through each army’s veins. Harken trotted in front of his army, a sword in his hand and a spear in t...
by WalterF
on Sun May 05, 2013 2:00 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!
Replies: 4
Views: 434

Re: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!

(Thank you so much for the feedback. These first parts were written over a year ago, so I can imagine I had more problems with my writing then. I very much appreciate it.) Chapter 2- Contemplation By the time both men had reached King’s Town and entered the castle, the rain had stopped. The clouds w...
by WalterF
on Thu May 02, 2013 7:17 am
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!
Replies: 4
Views: 434

Re: Paranoia Prision

This seems to be a very well thought-out RP. I'd love to join it. I haven't been around RPG for too long, but I have had multiple years experience in writing. This here is one of my favorite RP's that I've played in and my character for that is right here. The Character skeleton is a little bare-bon...
by WalterF
on Wed May 01, 2013 7:31 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Paranoia Prision
Replies: 32
Views: 1583

Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!

(This is very much a WIP- I am posting the most current draft which is the first, and I haven't finished it yet- And I am posting this here purely for critique and suggestions. Also, this is going to be a longer novel- already promising to be 100,000 words by the time I'm done. That said, Please tel...
by WalterF
on Sat Apr 27, 2013 8:34 pm
 
Forum: The Writer's Lounge
Topic: Simple Gifts- Feedback Wanted!
Replies: 4
Views: 434

Re: The Abandoned Ones

I shall try to post sometime today! *panics for no reason*
by WalterF
on Fri Mar 29, 2013 1:49 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

you're absolutely correct in saying I don't need the post, but I most certainly want the post. I could post if I wanted to, but I'm willing to wait a bit longer since Djiin said that a post was coming. I also like making things overly dramatic. :p
by WalterF
on Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:36 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

*pokes Djiin rather impatiently * I need you to pooooooooost!!
by WalterF
on Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:58 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: Of the Pagelings: Another Chapter

Id love to if i knew where ninja was.
by WalterF
on Tue Mar 12, 2013 7:38 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Of the Pagelings: Another Chapter
Replies: 111
Views: 3041

Re: The Abandoned Ones

that sounds great to me.
by WalterF
on Sun Mar 10, 2013 6:01 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

Djin, I'd appreciate you tagging for me or something.

I'm not a big fan of posting cycles myself. while not doing it can leave some people in the dust, I think It tends to hold people back.
by WalterF
on Sun Mar 10, 2013 3:29 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

My tagging function isn't working. <_<
by WalterF
on Sun Mar 10, 2013 1:34 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

submitted.... wondering if I could use my writing sample as my first post?
by WalterF
on Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:16 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

wow, the only reason I was pondering whether to join was how much interest this would gain. I see that's taken care of. *gets to work on a charrie*
by WalterF
on Fri Mar 08, 2013 8:12 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: The Abandoned Ones

I could possibly be joining...
by WalterF
on Fri Mar 08, 2013 4:55 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: The Abandoned Ones
Replies: 65
Views: 2245

Re: Love Lockdown

Tommygirl I'm pretty sure you can make it however you want within the limits already set in the description below the charrie.
by WalterF
on Fri Feb 22, 2013 12:59 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Love Lockdown
Replies: 21
Views: 1170

Re: Love Lockdown

are we going to start any time soon...? Maybe start with a couple missing charies or have someone or two double up with charries?
by WalterF
on Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:04 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Love Lockdown
Replies: 21
Views: 1170

Re: Love Lockdown

Can I take Pettyfer? And what do you want for a charrie skeleton/profile?
by WalterF
on Sat Feb 16, 2013 3:43 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Love Lockdown
Replies: 21
Views: 1170

Re: Of the Pagelings: Another Chapter

oh, dear, Lydia's having a tough time, isn't she? XD
by WalterF
on Wed Feb 06, 2013 7:11 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Of the Pagelings: Another Chapter
Replies: 111
Views: 3041

Re: Of the Pagelings: Another Chapter

Hmm, the character taggin thing isn't working for me right now.
by WalterF
on Fri Feb 01, 2013 8:30 am
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: Of the Pagelings: Another Chapter
Replies: 111
Views: 3041
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