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'God, Why do you hate me very much!'Ren mentally complained. He looked around but it seems no one really heard the alarm. 'Are they here already? No. There are other assassins here already! Where will I find them?' He formulated a plan in his head.

He ran towards the dojo. 'Hmm....This brings back memories. It's the last mission that I did and the first mission that I failed. Before that happened. Looks like I'm already in the dojo.' He said to himself as he take a look on his surroundings. The room was filled with 10 masked people. The mask was the symbol of the association, they were all rummaging in the dojo. Ren clapped so he could gain their attention. It was the clap of his Father. Because his Father was a sure high-ranking officer. Even if it disgusts him, he still did it to protect the Mouto's and their secret. After all it was the Master (Hidezaku's father) who helped him start a new life in Japan. He's willing to protect the Mouto's and their secret even if it means he will destroy his cover and join the conflict.

As expected they all looked at the source of the signal-clap. He raised an eyebrow when he saw one of them were shocked and the others were sweating bullets. But he just shrugged it off and started attacking, after all his first lesson was "You must hit the enemy where are they weak the most." Of course they retaliated, but they were still not just experienced and skilled as Ren. After several minutes, all of them are dead except one. This was the one who looked at him. He put one of his foot on the still-masked man's ribcage and started questioning, "If you ever lie or not answer me, I will crush one of your ribs. And if you answer me truthfully and quickly I will not kill you. First question, who are you?" The masked man gulped and answered, "Kaiten Asia." If ever Ren was shocked at his answer he never showed it, instead his eyes turned red and kicked the man's -now identified as Kaiten- rib making sure one of it broke.

Then he shouted angrily "Liar! That monster never had a relative! My mother already died! And I'm an only CHILD!. You could see in Ren's eyes all of his bottled emotion, such as rage, anger, sadness, frustration and the one that shone brightly above all was HATRED. Kaiten now, was sure he can piss his pants. Never before he had seen such an intense hatred, normally he would taunt them but seeing his situation he decided against it. After one minute of calming, Ren's eyes turned back to normal. Then he looked at Kaiten with a superior gaze, "How?". Kaiten looked afraid, he steeled himself and answered "I'm a child of one night stand." This time Ren looked shocked. Then he smirked and said "After Mother died he did that....He's really a bastard of a father isn't he?" Even though he looked okay, any expert would say he was already in the verge of breakdown. And Kaiten was an expert but he didn't said anything. "Okay, let's stop getting into the past. Next question, why are you here?"
"To know, the secret of the Mouto fighting style. And it's weakness"
"Typical." Ren murmured. After several minutes of questioning, "Now, I'm gonna left you alive. Tell to your superior that you're the only survivor, which is true. That the Master of the Mouto fighting style defeated you all single-handed. Remember this, I didn't kill you because you're my relative, half-brother in fact. But if ever you get in my way, Shinigami's door is waiting for you. Please tell my father that prepare for hell!" Ren said with conviction. Though he said it, his eyes tells a different story. It was full of pain, hatred and misery but what is the most shocking was it was sparkling with fossilized tears. Then he left.

Ren wasn't fairing so well. He went back to the garden finding the exit. But his feet was heavy and his mind was in turmoil. Half of his mind tells him to breakdown and the other half tells him not to breakdown. He slumped against the trunk of the largest tree he found. That eventful day, Ren decided to let his tears flow freely. That day just like any other human, Ren breakdown and cried himself to sleep.

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