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((Wow, I really can't decide whether I want to use past or present tense, you can tell in my writing.))
Ah-quaz:
I hear loud yelling. I get up from the bed I was sleeping in.
"Ah-quaz! Wake up! WAKE UP!" Ah-de yells while shaking me.
"W-What?" I wonder
"Your sister sent a herring with a letter it reads:
Dear Ah-quaz and Ah-de,
I will be going to the pronghorn nation. There seems to be some tension there, please go to Zhucran, quick! Fly if you have to, just go! Bring as many members of the army as you can, a map will be provided to tell you where it is. Please don't be afraid to fight, Ah-de will make sure to provide you with weapons and a bit of training. There will be crocs there, make sure they aren't hostile first. Please be careful.
Best,
Zoozoo-um

"We have to go, now! No time to say goodbye to everyone."
Ah-de grabs my arm and runs outside. Ariannona seems to have left with Vjallen, maybe it's best she didn't come with us. We run for a long time, flying for part of it, and walking for another part. Once I reach the mesa I realize that I am finally home. I fly onto the mesa and into the treehouse. Ah-de quickly grabs many sharp weapons, food, money and medicine.
"Come on" Ah-de wasn't his usual self, he seemed more serious that I would ever expect.
I dropped down from the treehouse and Ah-de reached a large group of army members that were training.
"I need a minimum of fifty leave minimum of one hundred." Ah-de's words seemed like gibberish to me, but they seemed to understand perfectly. A huge group of army members began following us and we rushed to Zhucran. Zhucran was over a mountain, through a forest. When I saw a extremely developed city with guards patrolling it, I knew this was Zhucran. Suddenly I noticed crocs entering in huge amounts. It is cruel, the crocs were capturing a group of herrings with no remorse at all. The army was at the border of Zhucran, fully prepared for a battle and possibly outnumbering the crocs while I was scared with only Ah-de to hold onto. How could I even defend myself?