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Commotion

"My personality could be described as... antisocial."

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a character in “Means to an End”, as played by Tomoya

Description

Name: Commotion (Obviously not his real name)

Alibi: Commotion is a world renowned detective, known to solve cases that baffle even the smartest detectives. His origins are unknown, as is his real name. It's been five years since anyone has heard from him, until the Kira investigation.

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Appearance: Image Commotion is tall and lean due to his diet. He has straight, average length, black hair. He has deep bags under his eyes, due to his lack of sleep. He always dresses in black suits and strange ties that are loose around his neck. His eyes are a dark blue. Overall he is described as a good looking, but strange man.

Personality: He would be described as a strange, but intelligent man. He has a tendency of getting very physically involved in the cases he takes part in. His personality almost never changes with who he's talking with. Commotion uses strange and irrational methods sometimes, but he always says that these methods are completely necessary. He can also act fairly well, but his acting may be over the top when he tries to act dramatically.

Faction: Detective

Other: Commotion has a rather strange diet of mostly salads, bread, and water. He also smokes whenever he's out on public, or if he wants to think hard. Commotion is also an insomniac.

Jake: Jake is Commotion's personal translator and assistant.

So begins...

Commotion's Story

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Ryan nodded to the young man and took a seat on the nearest couch. He leaned on the arm on the side and stared across the room. His gaze was interrupted by Extraordinaire, who sat across from him on the opposite couch. The two of them sat in silence for a few minutes before there was a commotion in the hallway. Ryan heard a "What the hell was that?" from the red haired man across the room. Moments later five people entered. One was the guard at the door, being caried by the other guard. What the hell happened to him? The third was a young, cocky looking young man, followed by a less boistrous woman who found a nice spot against the wall. The last person to enter was a Chinese cowboy who took a seat in the room. The young man decided to make himself the center of attention; Charming. Not smart to do in a room full of high class detectives.

The boy proclaimed that this might be a kira worshipping party. Why would he assume something like that? Ryan narrowed his eyes, but dismissed it as of now. This was not as important as the man who just entered. The odd tie caught Ryans eye but he looked back to the new arrival. This must be Commotion. Commotion spoke, and asked for names. The boy, Zachary, Introduced himself. He then proceeded to try to get it started without giving anyone time to give their names. How Polite. Ryan raised his hand and sat up straighter." Good Morning, My name is Caesura." He couldn't be too careful, From now on, he was Caesura.

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Ex sat across from Caesura. nodding to the young man who asked them to sit. "Merci.'" He looked over his new teammate carefully, taking in all of his features, deciding how useful he would be. This couldn't be said for sure until they knew more about each other. Just a moment later Ex heard a crash outside the door. "What the hell was that?" he exclaimed. He watched the door as a convoy of people strolled in, led by an unconscious guard being carried by a conscious one. He nodded to the new arrivals. The leader of the detectives was a young man. The youngest here. He decided to make himself a spectacle. 'Come on, kid, we dont need to deal with you right now.' He thought to himself. The boy quickly lost an audience when a man entered. Ex assumed this man was commotion, and became extremely excited.

He smirked and watched as the man gave his name. Kenji Okabe? Bullshit. Commotion has never given his real name, and he isnt gonna start now. He grinned as he looked around the room. If Kira was smart, he would find a way in here, and if he was in here, he thinks he can kill Commotion. How adorable.

Commotion asked for names and after two had spoken up he took his turn. He stood and bowed to Commotion. "Extraordinaire at your service sir." He smiled and sat back down.

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Character Portrait: Dalton Timothy Conway Character Portrait: Variel Reidevanur Character Portrait: Extraordinaire Character Portrait: Caesura Character Portrait: Natsu Akiko Character Portrait: Commotion
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As the smiling man disappeared off to somewhere, she tilted her head slightly as another appeared. This one struck her odd, though. He stood out amongst the other individuals to her, from his choice of wording and the tie that was much different from the rest of him. It was probably just her and her own opinions, but he was very awkward. But she wasn't one to judge, just yet. Natural human instincts and thoughts should come later, after everything is well established on this matter.

She waited patiently for the most of the men to introduce themselves, smiling before speaking up quietly and politely, taking smaller steps towards the group to maintain lady-likeness as much as possible. "Please refer to me as Camille, then. No need to be on a surname basis." She couldn't help the very deep accent that came from her mother tongue that was incorporated into saying her most common alias. "It's lovely to meet you all." Variel kept her gaze on this 'Kenji Okabe'. He struck her very oddly. Giving names was no problem, but the way it was said. He seemed to have been quite withdrawn and slightly uncomfortable. She kept her smile as her poker face, continuing to observe everyone.

She had looked over towards the two men who had been already in the room when they had introduced themserlves, Caesura and Extraordinaire? Quite obvious aliases, aren't they? She wouldn't have been surprised if all the names being given are aliases, seeing as they were all technically strangers, and being in a room with individuals who mostly have no connection to each other, one should be cautious. Being part of a team, where we've all been selected to become a part of.. This'll be very interesting. She glanced towards Zach. Though, he is the only one who spoke about 'Kira', when no one had mentioned him at all.. She paused in between of her thoughts as everyone continued with introductions.

Variel looked back to 'Kenji'. Out of all of the individuals, he gives off the most weirdest of impressions since entering. Given that Commotion is generally a single person, as best known of the information I had heard from throughout some years, he'd probably be withdrawn. ..Perhaps this would be Commotion? She's construct a better profiling later, when she'd gather enough observation notes from everyone.

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Character Portrait: Dalton Timothy Conway Character Portrait: Variel Reidevanur Character Portrait: Extraordinaire Character Portrait: Caesura Character Portrait: Natsu Akiko Character Portrait: Commotion
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Dalton turned towards the two men who had introduced themselves. He stared at one and then the other without saying a word. Instantly, he could tell they didn't have a good opinion about him. But on further inspection, he noticed that they had to be among genius level. This was more promenant in the man who introduced himself as "Kenji". He didn't bother with the cowboy, not yet at least.

His cockiness was removed and he wasn't annoyed anymore. Instead, he took a rather serious and dire look. "What is this meeting?" he said once more, in a nearly cold tone. He knew that this was no meeting of actors and that it was in relation to Kira, as he noticed sudden changes in some of them when he mentioned that. He glanced towards Kenji. "You guys are looking for Kira?"

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Character Portrait: Dalton Timothy Conway Character Portrait: Variel Reidevanur Character Portrait: Extraordinaire Character Portrait: Caesura Character Portrait: Natsu Akiko Character Portrait: Commotion
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Ling coughed; he actually wasn't used to smoking cigarettes and preferred Cuban cigars.
Whomever this kid was he was a problem and Ling hoped he would not have to kill him; killing the young was not his style, in fact Ling only killed people directly in a fair fight if he could help it. There was quite an interesting bunch of people and Ling could tell they were all here for the same reason he was, Ling could identify an undercover detective a mile away which was why he was still alive. Commotion was another matter, Ling barley had any direct contact with him and yet Commotion was able to uncover him completely and bring his smuggling operation to a watery grave; literally a watery grave since most of his ships were sunk by a variety of special sabotage units. With the ships Ling lost his status in the syndicate and eventually had to call it quits with Commotion, while Commotion had no solid evidence to use against him he was able to wipe out all of Lings operations and eventually Ling just quit the weapons trade and gave Commotion list of all the suppliers in exchange for peace. Commotion was no ordinary detective; he knew how to deal with crime on a level of a criminal mastermind, but sadly he was still a detective; one that didn't play by the rules but a detective all the same.

Ling tossed the cigarette into the bin after making sure it was out, a fire started by a cigarette had happened before in a few places and Ling wasn't about to start one.

He didn't remove his sunglasses or hat but he permitted himself to relax a bit, he saluted and said;

"The name is Sergeant Boris" said Ling with more of a Russian accent then he had intended; it wasn't actually a lie because Boris was his name when he served in the Russian army or more specifically the Red army but ever since he had lost his memories due to his injury the name simply didn't feel real to Ling, in fact no name seemed right to him until he was scared and got the easy way out of the dilemma.

"To answer your question this is a gathering of all the soviet leaders of Japan in preparation for the great rising of the proletariat." Said Ling with conviction and then broke into a laugh. He removed his hat and sunglasses and said deciding to continue using his Russian accent, he actually liked using it and it was useful in these kinds of meetings.
"I make joke! The meeting is not Proletariat class struggle, the meeting is a business meeting of people who are certainly not Proletariats and do not like Lenin Stalin or Trotsky."

Ling laughed again, his newly grown mustache was certainly adding to the identity he was embracing but it was actually a coincidence that he had decided to grow it.

"Nyet, Meeting Not Kira party but I would not mind going to Kira party if only for the drinks, I imagine people who go to Kira party are very high on Vodka!"
Ling laughed again and finally let himself light a cigar, he paused for a moment enjoying the cigar.
"excusings please but what language are we going to speak in meeting? English or Japanese? I would rather have English if everyone understand it,i lived in new York for number of years so I know English. I also know Japanese but not as well"

Ling starred at a girl in the room. She looked familiar and gave Ling the feeling he should have a pistol ready.

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Character Portrait: Hanako Takahasi Character Portrait: Dalton Timothy Conway Character Portrait: Commotion
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#, as written by Kaire23
Hanako stopped searching the internet for a second as her eyes caught the T.V.... tempting her. She quickly got up and flipped through the T.V. again like she did every morning selecting a special recording she saved.

"We're sorry to interrupt your scheduled program, but this is a message for all of Japan, and involves the investigation of the criminal known as 'Kira'."

Just hearing the word "Kira" gave her those chills again. She never could quite understand those chills. She watched through the whole thing like she did earlier this morning.

"This is your enemy Hanako." She muttered to herself. Talking to herself wasn't something new to her. She did it on a regular basis whenever she was alone. It made her feel like she wasn't the only one. For a moment, she could believe there was someone out their like her. This broadcast was something that immediately caught her eye. It was the first thing that she didn't deliberately do to make herself feel like their was someone out their like her. She quickly re-winded and paused on "Commotion"..... She always hated cops. She always put so much faith into them and they always came short.
"This time-" She stifled a laugh in the middle of her sentence. "This time I'm going to make them fall short." She quickly pulled out the Notebook she found recently.... Death Note.... She silently studied it again as she had before. She opened to the first page. Hanako quickly glanced at the computer screen again, picking out a name on "Japan's Most Wanted"

"MY lord, Kira, only kills the unjust." She said aloud as she wrote down a name and found a smile on her lips. "This is for you. May we meet soon Kira....." She closed the Death Note and looked at the clock, waiting for her first kill to be done. This was just a test She thought. I'll get your attention if this works. She opened the note book again as she read over her words one last time. Takeshi Sato. Committed suicide by jumping off the top of Hotel Sakura. She looked up at the clock and smiled. It'd happen any second now. She walked back to her T.V. and went through her recordings and picked one of her personal favorites.

"People of the world! Heed this warning! Those people! The ones that call themselves Justice! The ones that call themselves detectives! The ones that say they will protect, shelter, and bring you justice, have failed! I come offering myself to the heavens not because of them, but because of the lord, Kira! Let it be known that Kira is the new god of this world! Let it be known that the detectives can no longer bring you justice! From now on, all those who commit horrid crimes such as these shall be punished by his own hand! But the innocent needn't worry! Kira only punishes those who would stand against Justice! Rejoice! For starting now, Kira will bring about the end of suffering!"

Hanako shivered as the last words were spoken. It was absolute beauty and she couldn't take her eyes off the screen for one second. She didn't need to. Time was up for Takeshi Sato. She quickly went to live T.V. and waited for the moment to come. When it would become know what has happened. "Let Kira find this and have him search for me." Hanako said as the news reporters picked up on the latest bit of news.

"In the latest news, Takeshi Sato, who is wanted for countless murders, was found seconds ago jumping off Hotel Sakura. We'll be back with that once we have more information on what exactly happened." Hanako started quietly laughing as she layed down on her couch.

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#, as written by Kaire23
"Are you happy Kira?" She asked as she watched the scene on the television play out.
"Did I do a good job?" Hanako asked as she noticed something on the T.V.

"We are not quite sure if this is a Kira killing yet but we will come back to you once we know." She heard from the T.V. as she sat straight up.

How dare they question it!? This is a Kira killing!!! She screamed in her mind. She was infuriated that she seemed to have messed up. How could she forget the message!?
"It was just a test run. Don't worry." She muttered to herself as she walked over to her computer. "I'm gonna make it so their can be no doubt about me being Kira." She stated as a smile grew on her lips. "Heh, there's gonna be a blood bath tonight." Hanako said as she started laughing quietly. She skimmed through the internet on "Kira" as she found some of his killings.
"Do I want it to be known that there is a second Kira?... Kira will come to find me regardless because theirs another one like him." She hugged herself and spinned in her office chair as she said the last part. She quickly stopped the chair in front of her computer as she looked through the articles
"Then again.... If I come out, then the cops will have to worry even more.... Especially that stupid, idiotic Commotion!" She yelled the last part as she felt like throwing something.
"How dare he try to stop my Kira? How could he ever even think about doing that? Huh!?" She quickly opened her note book again.
"I'll show him." Hanako said as she laughed to herself. "I'll show him that you don't mess with My Savior." She said as she highlighted a couple of names on the computer. Just then, some lines of what Commotion said went through her head.

"You're not even in the same league as a real detective like myself, if you were, you wouldn't need to kill to provide justice. For someone as screwed up as you to think he can provide justice, you need serious help." She gritted her teeth as the last words went through her head.

"You're dead Commotion!!" she yelled as she scribbled down a name. Ren Hokkaido. Shot himself after he screamed "Kira is the lord of this world! All bow before him!" She laughed as she finished writing. She felt good about this. Yes. She thought Kira would like it too. She quickly walked to her bedroom. She quickly got changed and ready to walk the streets. She couldn't wait for Kira to find her house along with her. She quickly moved her bed and took off the board that led to the basement. She walked down and picked her favorite spot to hide it. She was just about to leave it when she had this horrible feeling. She didn't want to leave this here. She quickly ripped off a piece of paper and folded it as she zipped it up in her jacket. She quickly re-hid the death note and rushed back upstairs. As soon as she covered the hole with the floor board again, she moved the bed back. She looked at it awhile and was still feeling quite paranoid about her Death Note. She quickly made a note in her head to buy a big rug next time she went shopping to cover the hidden basement.
"It's fine. Calm down. It'll be fine." She said to calm herself and finally turned her back, grabbed her purse, shut down her computer, and walked out.
"Today is a nice day." She said to herself as she strolled through the city.

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Character Portrait: Dalton Timothy Conway Character Portrait: Variel Reidevanur Character Portrait: Extraordinaire Character Portrait: Caesura Character Portrait: Natsu Akiko Character Portrait: Commotion
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Ling ran after the kid, he heard the noise and recalled it from when he himself was collecting debts; some gangs would not pay even x red army officers so some times extreme measures had to be taken.

He arrived at the seen and saw the mess, the body was smashed but Ling could still recognize the man.

Takeshi Sato, 23 known more commonly as silent death. For two years he had killed business men as an assassin until the police some how found out his identity; this was what the public knew but Ling knew quite a bit more.

Sato was a hit man hired by the Hojo family and was tasked with the killing of many of their business rivals. After he finished the job the Hojo family framed him and sold him out to the police in order to get rid of him after they failed to kill him of with another hit man. Sato had no real information about his clients and yet he was able to track down nearly all of the Hojo's and kill them off one by one.

The police had been hunting him for at least two months but he was way out of their league. Ling could not think of any reason for him to kill himself but on his line of business people could crack.

Ling took out a glove from one of his pockets and searched his bag; his phone might hold some very interesting information which ling could sell later. Ling also stumbled at his wallet and examined the contents, he saw in it plans for a date written down on a small piece of paper and a fake ID as well as what seemed to be a hit job ID profile on target.

"Clever" Ling said to himself; he had seduced the target, a young woman into going on a date with him. If he had not died this day she would have been as good as dead.

Ling stood up and pocketed the evidence, he wanted to be able to bribe Sato's clients and if the police got the data it would not do any one any good at all.
He lit a cigar and put on his sunglasses while he walked away back to the conference room.

No one had seen him apart from the kid and he and the rest of the people who saw the suicide were too busy running around looking for a phone in order to call the police.
But the kid may have seen him; Ling could tell he was a smart kid or at least an educated one.

Ling returned to the room and tossed the evidence on the table.

"A man just jumped of the hotel and killed himself, he didn't say anything but he was a wanted criminal and i do not think he killed himself out of his own will"

"This was a kira kill, look at the evidence yourselves. People like Sato live for their jobs; they take a thrill in chasing their targets, his particular breed of assassin does not kill for the money, they do it for the fun of it."

Ling passed the wallet and its contents around and waited for a few moments.

"He had a target and when people like him get a target they do not kill themselves before making a kill. The chances of him having a break down or suddenly realizing his crimes are hardly even worth mentioning."

"I would say there is about 70% chance of this being a Kira kill; why Kira didn't make him yell out his normal message I can only guess"
Ling took off his sun glasses and sat down

"No doubt about it, Kira's weapon is some kind of tech with permits long ranged mind control."

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#, as written by Kaire23
Hanako smiled as she heard the news cast. She now had to think. Kira should know by now that i want to meet.... but how? hmm... well, first I should make it clear to only us that I want to meet him.... but how? She thought as an idea popped into her head. She quickly looked up at the screen to see some news about a hostage. Immediately, she felt infuriated.
How dare this man take a hostage!? She screamed in her mind. This man needed to die now. She couldn't stand him being alive any longer. She quickly walked into a library and took out the first book she came across. She unzipped her pocket in her jacket and slipped out her piece of paper. Hiding it with her book, She wrote down the criminal's name. Daichi Fujimoto. Brutal death after yelling out "I wish I could've seen Kira before my end. He is justice!" She had to stop herself from laughing in this public place. She quickly put the book away after she zipped the paper back in her jacket. She looked around and grabbed an interesting book and bought it. When she walked out, She saw on t.v. that her killing worked yet again. She almost had to laugh when the screen immediately went to black. She wondered what could've happened to him but she didn't care at all. She quickly stopped at a furniture store and bought a rug for under her bed. It was to be shipped tomorrow. Better safe than sorry She thought to herself as she walked home.
Once inside, she closed the door and walked to her bedroom where she immediately started laughing hysterically. She couldn't hold it in anymore. People were finally getting justice at her's and Kira's hands.
"Suck it Commotion." She quoted Kira as she sat down in her chair.
"Should I kill another tonight?" She thought as she twirled around in her spinning chair.
"Oh how I love this. The Kira killings shall shake up the cops. The murders of the unjust should turn the people towards us." She smirked as she continued to twirl around in her chair.
"Oh Kira, I wonder what your like. What do you look like? How can we meet?..... Are you happy with me?" She questioned as she turned on her computer. This was too fun to keep her computer off. Maybe she'd do one more kill before she went to watch T.V.

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Obviously, he was still stuck on thought about a second Death Note. His shinigami, did not inform him of this fact: that two Death Notes were possible, though he should've assumed that there could've been. Hell, there could've been more. Then, the news caught his attention yet again....

"A man has taken hostages at a local convenience store. The man walked into the store and immediately ordered the cashier to give him all the money in the register. A cop walked in on him and was shot in the torso, but was able to be recovered by a civilian and is in critical condition. All of the customers were taken hostage along with the cashier."

"Are they testing me?" Dalton called out to the T.V. "If that's the case, then I'll just let them see me kill the bastard. He went to take out his Death Note from his bag that he layed down at the side of his bed, but was stopped by, yet again, the news.

"I wish I could've seen Kira before the end! He is Justice!" a voice rang out over the television, followed by the man leaving the victims and firing upon the cops, which prompted them to return the gift. He was cut down, violently by the hail of lead flying towards him, ripping his arms and legs off before he bled out, AND THEN the camera shut off.

"We're sorry for the gruesome display!" the announcer apologized before the topic switched.

"Perfect!" he laughed. "Now the second one is killing the unjust. I think I may have a fan of my work! The police and Commotion won't be able to track us down right away, as long as I can coordinate with this other "Kira". I just need to find out how to meet with said person, and if not deemed a threat, plan. It'll be perfect!"

He layed back, the other Kira's messge was recieved, it wanted to meet with him for real, so they just had to figure a way to do so.... but how?.... he still didn't know how to meet without Commotion figuring it out. He needed something that only the second Kira would be able to pick up on.... he lost himself in a flurry of thoughts.

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#, as written by Kaire23
Hanako just finished looking through her computer when she came across something interesting.
"Shit.... College will be starting soon..." she mumbled as she decided to have fun with the last of the day. She quickly opened Japan's most Wanted again as she grabbed her piece of paper out of her pocket. As much as she wanted to grab her Death Note, she felt she should use up this paper and also keep that there until she was able to get the rug down.
"I wonder... Does Kira want to see me too?" She questioned as she felt a sharp pain in her heart. She always hated this feeling of abandonment.
"Of course he'd want to see you! You want the same thing as him Hanako!" She told her reflection in the computer. She quickly studied the list that she highlighted again and quickly wrote one down.
Kiyoshi Kutikara. died brutally after shouting "Our lord, Kira will save the just. All the just have nothing to fear as long he is around! Let the world rain blood of the unjust tonight. Let it be known that the savior, Kira has come and shall save us all. He is justice and shall prevail. Commotion doesn't stand a chance."
She smiled as she finished writing and spun around in her chair.
"Let the world rain blood of the unjust tonight. Let it be known that the savior has come and shall save us all. He is justice and shall prevail. Commotion doesn't stand a chance." She quoted happily while, still, twirling in her chair. She hopped out of the chair and walked over to her T.V. and quickly turned it on and clicked the record button. She didn't want to miss another kill. So far, all of them have been recorded. All she could hope for now was a response from Kira. She wanted him to say he wanted to meet her too. That was one of her biggest concerns. What if he was angry at her killings? Did he not like the help with killings?
"Oh how i want to meet him so I could figure out." She said as she buried her face into her pillow. She couldn't stand not being with him. She wanted to meet him no matter what. More than anything though, she at least wanted a response.
"Tell me I'm doing good. Tell me I'm doing it right..... Are you happy with me?" She wanted to please him so badly. She would do anything.

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"Ke.. ke.. kekeke!" Tarantos chuckled at the screen of showing dead Human after another as their names were being written in the Death Note(s), his shoulders making a slight popping sound from dislocating to readjusting themselves as he laughed in short, raspy sounds, his bones structure having not been made for such a thing like laughing. He didn't feel much pain as to what the sound his bones were making to lead to assumption in the contrary. This 'Dalton Timothy Conway' character was so different and yet so amusing to watch! Had he known the Human World would have these sort of humans, he'd have tried it out in fancy earlier in his lifetime! He observed as quietly as he could though, the chuckling taking up to what he would be usually be taking long, dry breaths that were low, like humming, but were in fact, a groaning sound. He had been observing this Human, and watched the entirety of the events that has taken place so far. This 'Commotion' character who seemed have come into play, but has yet to take much action, while Dalton was on a roll of a killing spree, one Human after the other. It amazed him to see how humans took these common everyday tools of Shinigami and just went all out over it. It was certainly different from the usual bore of the Shinigami Realm. And then the variety of other humans, the one human who kept lying her name, and then the burning of Dalton's house! Too interesting!

It was slightly concerning to know that there were other Death Notes that have been dropped, but he didn't mind it much. However, as long as he can continue to observe, it didn't matter to him. Tarantos had written out the Death Note's purpose onto the inside of the book cover that he dropped. He barely gives any thought to what the lazy Shinigami he took it from would react. Surely he wasn't that much of an idiot to not write names to live longer.. would he? Tarantos doesn't dwell long.

He watches as Dalton and another Human communicate through the killings, he isn't stupid, he understands what they were doing. Slightly tapping Dalton very lightly on the shoulder to request his attention, and when he gets it, he makes a sort of question mark with his fingers, being able to bend them disturbingly flexible enough to that point as he curves the palm of his hand to make the remaining curve as his fingers became in synch as the upper curve. He pauses in a short moment, and then tilts his head to a small angle - like how the little female Humans do when they interact with other little tiny Humans in confusion. Unlike them, his necks makes a cracking pop sound as like his ones were finally being brought out of a very stiff position for the first time in a very long time. It's loud. To say the very least, it wasn't as 'cute' as what the tiny Humans were when they did. His silence though, and actions indicating to ask Dalton as to what he was doing, should've been brought across. 'What're you gonna do now?' After all, Tarantos wasn't a mind reader, he was a Shinigami. Shinigamis, at least to his knowledge, weren't capable of such things.

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It's gotten to a point where it's completely inconvenient. Variel lightly frowns, as 'Zach' darts out the door after a body has jumped down from seemingly out of nowhere, the most logical place being from the roof. The meeting hadn't even been completely and officially established. She quickly gets out of the way as 'Sargent Boris' darts out the room, following after 'Zach'.

Is it even possible to have so many deaths happening practically everyday? Shouldn't it be against the universe's law and order of existence, or some bull like that? She takes in the various change in behavior amongst the other individuals, tightening her grip on her folded arms. This investigation will have to take it up a notch. People are dying, be it by 'Kira' or not, even in these sorts of efforts to stop 'Kira'. "This 'Kira' business certainly keeps one on their toes, does it not?" She voices politely, despite her inner irritation. It's a rather rhetorical statement. Variel slightly ponders about what 'Commotion' will do now. The main suspect of being said famous detective didn't even get a chance to speak any further in this meeting before events of more deaths are being tossed around like it's a ballgame.

Not too long, 'Sargent Boris' returns with some wallet, tossing it onto the table. As he's explaining the situation, she cannot help but crinkle her nose slightly in distaste. Taking evidence from the crime scene didn't much justice for the deceased. They would have to give it to the law enforcement later. She doesn't dare touch it, lest she be at risk of spreading her fingerprints but does look at it from a distance, taking in what it was containing from whether or not the others took anything out and memorizes it to a clear image now in her mind, and merely keeps to herself as the scar faced man makes a conclusion with these following events. She carefully takes the information into mind.

This Sato person is not someone that I know of, she makes conclusion from context, assassins aren't what I deal with. But the M.O's different. He committed suicide, no ridiculous proclamation.. but there is the odd behavior that's common in every other victim, as he pointed out. She voices out her opinion, "why would you say 'mind-control'?" Her French accent that she hasn't completely gotten rid of rings more harshly in her formal Japanese. "There're many different methods to do this, we just don't know it yet with the lack of Kira's weapon shown. No need to immediately go onto a final conclusion off of the lack of recurring evidence." Variel doesn't voice out her slight discomfort over how she recognizes the scar on his face, but cannot exactly remember just who he was. It brought her at attention though, and caution from instinct that told her that she mustn't get too close, or she may risk her life just being in the same room as this guy.

((OOC: I'll be slightly laying off from posting too much as Variel, so everyone else can catch up. I see that there're many unanswered questions. Hopefully Tomoya comes back soon from wherever s/he's disappeared off to. Kitsune_Natsu too.))

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Hanako let herself lay there for a couple of minutes as she thought of how she was going to meet Kira. They'd have to use something that only they would understand... Sadly, they didn't know each other enough to make a code of some sort.
"The only thing we know of each other is our killings. We could try to link that into our code somehow but Commotion might have his people there. Even if he didn't, I'd still have to think of something else in common.... I could try to link it to our killings but I'm pretty sure that it'd be pretty packed still from the murders that occurred there recently. I could make a 1-4-2-3 pattern with my killings, but we'd have no way of linking it to something we'd both know.... If I were able to think of something, we'd be meeting at the store where the hostages were taken which would actually be good since they'd be trying to bury what had happened there because it's bad for business." She said quietly to herself, trying to think of how to make a pattern he would know. Suddenly, she sat straight up. The Death Note! It was something they both had in common. She quickly moved her bed and ran downstairs to get it. Once she opened it, she went straight to the rules.
"What would be some phrases that would strike a chord with him and i could link it to the murders?" Hanako said to herself.
"Name. Heart attack. Same name. Cause." she mumbled to herself.
"It'd be a bit like gibberish but it would get the point across. Now, to add killing place in there... How can i make it?" She said as she started thinking hard.
"Answer me this riddle?" She tested out saying it as she thought hard.
"Oh! I'd have to switch it to a five pattern because this would be my fifth kill." She said as she switched up the words in her mind.
"Answer me this riddle. Name, You have 6 min and 40 seconds to find me, Heart attack, Same name. Now, come find me Commotion." She said to herself as she thought of making it seem like a taunt. Only Kira would know that it wasn't a taunt. Now, she'd have to link it to her murders.
"Answer me this riddle.... Name, You have 6 min and 40 seconds to find me, Heart attack, Same name. Now, come find me Commotion." She said as she laid down.
"This is hard. How would i link this to my murders? For commotion, he wouldn't be able to tell the difference of the deaths so he'd have no chance of finding us... But how can i say-... ugh, hang on...." She quickly said to herself as she started re-wording the phrase again.
"Answer me this riddle. Name, You have 6 minutes and 40 seconds to find my killing place, Heart attack, same name. Now, Come find me Commotion." She said with a smile. She now had an idea of how to meet.
"Now, all i need to do is wait for the publicity of the shop to die down." She said to herself as she put the death note back and ran upstairs to tell Kira the good news. She quickly flipped on her computer and went back to her new favorite site.
Sadau Ikeda. Shot himself after yelling "Kira has plans! All the just must do is wait for his plans to be revealed." She smiled as she finished. She hoped he would be happy about this. She would have to wait awhile before meeting though. Hopefully they'd be able to talk until then though.

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Hanako quickly grabbed a bag of potato chips and opened them as she sat down in her chair again.
"Oh Kira, I hope your happy with me." She said as she put the bag down and quickly covered the floor board and moved the bed over it. She quickly returned to her snacking at her chair as she looked through the internet.
"Okay, if I were to count the days, I'd say we could meet in two days..." She said as she munched on a chip.
"Answer me this riddle. Name, You have 6 minutes and 40 seconds to find my killing place, Heart attack, same name, Wheres the cause? Now, Come find me Commotion." She said as she notice she'd need a place to meet inside the store. She looked at her chips and quickly shrugged.
"By the potato chips?... but how could I put that in?..." She mumbled as she tried to keep thinking.
"Answer me this riddle. Name, You have 6 minutes and 40 seconds to find my killing place, Heart attack, same name, The cause is by the potato chips. Now, Come find me Commotion." She said as she finally finished.
"A bit of nonsense never hurt anyone..." She said as she munched on another chip.
"I should have a kill 6 minutes and 40 seconds after this to make him think he actually had a chance and that this was his punishment." She said with a smirk as she highlighted more names on the computer.
"This will be fun." She said as she folded up the chip bag, put it away, grabbed some leftovers, and heated them up.
"Now, to eat." She said with a smile as she ate her left over chicken.
Surprisingly, this still tastes as good as the first time. she thought to herself as she quickly finished and cleaned her place.
"Now, all I have to do is wait for tomorrow." Hanako said as she quickly went to take a shower. After the shower, she quickly slipped into her pajamas and then layed in her bed.
"Night Kira. Hope to have messages from you tomorrow." Hanako said as she went to sleep.

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Hanako climbed out of bed sleepily as she automatically went to the computer. She never was a morning person. She quickly typed "Kira" in google and then walked to the kitchen for some food.
"Maybe i should switch it to the phone booth outside of the store instead...." she said sleepily, her mind trying to keep thinking of plans even though right now, all it cared about was how fast she could get food to her stomach. She opened the cupboard and grabbed a box of "Fruity Pebbles" out. She quickly poured it into a bowl and poured milk all over it. Once this was done, she hurridly grabbed a spoon and shoveled it down quickly. She had too many plans to be thought out to have the time of eating slowly. She needed her whole mind to be focused on how to meet Kira. Once done, she quickly rushed to her desk to make the rest of the saying.
Akira Hosake. heart attack after yelling "Commotion. Let's play a game. Answer this riddle to find me. Here it is. Name, You have 6 minutes and 40 seconds to find my killing place, same name, Heart attack, I'll call you outside. Now, Come find me. I hope your skills are as good as some say. Can't wait to see you..... That is, if you can solve this." she smiled as she quickly changed and ran out the door. She had to get to the phone booth outside the store now. She smiled as she completely forgot the search she was doing and walked the rest of the way to the store.