Introduction
Somewhere in the backstreets of Chicago, there's a bar where people of every background and order go to mingle and conspire...
The air fills with criminals, crooks, and cigar smoke. A curly-haired, brunette with a strapless red dress slowly serenades the men wearing pinstripe coats and derby hats. There is no law here and criminals discuss their empires and accomplishments freely under the mist of smoke. Dodgy deals are going down all around as crooks embellish tall tales of their conquests and recruit new members. There's a charming, yet sinister, man sitting between two beautiful women and treating them to glass after glass of champagne. Two hefty men in trenchcoats shake hands and someone's fate in another part of the city is sealed. This bar houses the criminal organization known only as "The Vagrant."
But underneath all the corruption, in the very same alley, there's a small group of people whose interests differ greatly from the criminal empire of the Chicago shadows. These men and women aren't necessarily the good guys, but they are certainly the lesser of two evils. They are driven by money and greed, but unlike The Vagrant, they would never take an innocent life. These men and women are known only as "The Valiant."
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He watched a beautiful woman in a red dress exit her apartment and head off down the street. Pins turned and walked across the street and into an alley not far away. He stopped for a moment before being swallowed up by the darkness. She was beautiful wasn’t she? The image of the woman he just saw flashed through his mind. But there’s probably a hundred more just like her. He tossed the cigarette and entered the doors on the right. This was his usual haunt, love was made and destroyed within these walls, blood had been spilt just outside the door soon after steel was drawn and almost everyone was looking for action. Pins loved it here.
He walked to the bartender and ordered his usual, a scotch on the rocks. He wasn’t even three sips into the drink when someone spoke to him and not at the best time either. “Pins, you’re as ugly as ever.” It was Dennis, a young, wanna-be Valiant who had his ideals out on display for the world to see. He’d made some mistakes in the past, most of them forgivable but he had no idea what he was getting himself into. Pins could see the man’s fly was undone, his shirt was sticking out in places and he had no tie. “You lost your woman tonight Dennis? Or you never had one to begin with?” Pins turned back to his scotch as Dennis planted himself on the stool next to him with much effort. “You’re an idiot, she’s in my room, and she’s finding all her clothes hot.”
“They why are you down here with me?” Pins didn't even look at him; Dennis was still young and stupid. He still hadn’t slept with anyone. The man stared at Pins of a second before walking away.
Pins only grinned.
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"Thanks Ted."
With a toothpick in his mouth he walked to the door, scanning the room for anyone he might know, or want to talk to. He opened the door and took a step outside when he stopped and stared at the wall opposite. He backtracked a couple of steps and looked to his left. There, sitting in a booth was the woman he had seen walk away from the bar earlier that night. He had seen just about everyone else come in here more than once and knew who the regulars were, the dealers, who to watch out for, who were the idiots and the tools. She seemed like she could fit in the second category. But she was new, and alone.
Maybe he'd hang around a little longer before heading to his place. Just to see how things would turn out for her. He walked back to the bar across the room and ordered another round from the jovial bartender. He swiveled the stool around so that he was looking at the entire room. There was a momentary lull in the noise made within the bar. Pins heard a grunt from beyond the door, if a man had just been stabbed it wasn't his fault so he resumed drinking.
"You packing tonight Pins?" The bartender asked.
"Always, you?"
"I have the Winchester under the counter. Don't mind settling the mess that's happening outside if things get worse?"
Ted was asking Pins a favor without paying him; something not many people did. But if Pins wanted the bar to stay open then he had no choice but to agree.
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If he did, she'd pat the empty space of seat next to her, inviting him to join her. Young women didn't go to bars and drink alone; she knew better. She needed to make the right friends. And even if the guy at the bar wasn't the right kind of friend, she knew she'd be able to steer clear of him and find others. She let her eyes wander over him, looking for rings, watches, any name tags, anything that would give away what he was. A businessman? A husband? A bookie? She was too curious, she had watched him walk to the door and watched him return to his seat. What was he doing? Waiting to go home? Maybe there was a deal going down...She watched quietly with her coy smile helplessly curled on her too open face.
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She patted the empty space beside her and Pins blinked. He put the cigarette between his lips, grabbed his glass and walked towards her. Before he sat he put his elbow on the headrest of the booth’s seats and leaned on it. She was a new face in these parts and seemed to have this aura of innocence about her, but he knew looks could be deceiving. Pins had a problem; he was a sucker for women, and amazing smiles.
Regardless of that he decided to act friendly, contacts were important. Sure she could have been looking to hire him and he’d most likely accept, depending on what he was doing and how much he was getting paid. “A woman like you alone at this hour; you don’t seem apprehensive one bit.” He smiled back and pulled the cigarette out of his mouth. “We don’t get very many women like you in these parts.” He sat down next to her and got rid of the smoke.
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"Beautiful night, this is...no?" the mime said as he grabbed his cigarette and took a puff out of it.
"I guess so," Joey replied. She then walked away, trying to ignore the mime.
"Where are my manners? Je suis Mike," he said while walking alongside her, "Mike Senavarge." Joey still ignored Mike and walked to the piano bar.
"Perhaps it was wrong of me to speak to strange lady like you. After all...it is the middle of the night. My apologies," Mike smirked as he removed his mechanical larynx and headed off the the piano bar with Joey. Joey looked at Mike a few times, but headed to the bar. Once they got there, Mike opened the door for her and headed straight for the bartender. He tapped the table and soon the bartender turned.
"Ah, you again." The barkeep said. "The usual?" Mike nodded his head and then waited for his drink.
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She cast a wary glance to the mime at the bar. "Mike the Mime", she'd try to remember him. And hopefully avoid him in the future. She wasn't sure if it was the cancer kazoo or the attempted french accent, but he gave her a cold shiver up her spine. She leaned slightly into the man who had just joined her, given the latter she'd choose to be walked home by the gent than the mime.
She shifted some in her seat and pursed her lips waiting for her cigarette to be lit.
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"Sorry about giving you that scare, madam," Mike smiled as he took another sip. "Want me to light your smoke?" Joey nodded to Mike. Mike then took a deep breath and said, "It's the voice box, isn't it? Look, I can't fix the voice, and this was the best I got to getting my real voice back. My larynx was removed from me at a young age, so I have to use this. And no, it's not from smoking." Joey then looked at him. Mike took a gulp out of his drink and looked at Joey. "Perhaps it's the teeth. I know it's creepy, but I really don't want to pose a threat to you. I'm just a regular guy." Joey was still quiet, she just leered at him.
"Dude, I think you should just leave the lady alone." the man said.
"She didn't tell you, so I can stay here all I want," Mike growled.
"Hey, don't you talk to me that way." the man snarled. Mike apologized for his outburst and kept drinking his beverage.
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"I also do not recall inviting you to sit with my friend and I. This is a private drink with private matters, and none that involve a mime. Pity about your larynx, but you should move along." She waved her hand in a shooing gesture back to the bar.
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"Are you that guy that does those dirty tasks?" the man asked. Mike nodded his head as he obtained his drink. "Listen...I need you to take this person out for me," the man whispered. He then showed Mike a picture of a person. Mike looked at it and then grabbed a piece of paper from his pocket and a pen.
"How will I locate this man?" Mike wrote down.
"I hear that some dame near here knows about him," the man smirked. Mike only recalled one woman that was near here and knew about this man.
"Where should I kill him?" Mike scribbled on the paper.
"Preferably in his house," the man said. "If you take the job, I'll pay you $5000 for your services." After some time, Mike agreed to the offer and shook hands with the stranger. The stranger then gave Mike his phone number. "Call me when the job is done. Make sure you have some sort of proof that he's dead. I don't want to be screwed over." Mike got his drink and slowly sipped it down. He was thinking about the job he just got, the strange man and the picture of the person he had to kill. Ideas kept passing his mind and he was waiting...waiting for right time to confront Joey since he knew the two were connected somehow. He then got his mechanical larynx and placed it on his neck as he then walked out of the bar and to Joey's apartment. There, he knocked the door and waited for a response.
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Pins turned to the woman and leaned back on the backrest. “You have some strange friends.” He smirked when he recalled her annoyed expression at the man with the voice machine mere moments ago.
“Look why don’t we go someplace-“Pins was cut off, a gunshot was heard from the ally. He looked at the bartender, who was pulling his Winchester out from under the counter. It was game time; no doubt the people in the other bar had had an argument and decided that a piece of lead in someone’s body was the way to end things. Pins swore under his breath and got up. He walked towards Ted and told him about his current situation; he hadn’t met with a woman like this in a while and didn’t want to leave her so soon. Ted argued that he had to keep a promise. Pins knew he had a reputation to maintain. They had a short but heated conversation before Ted finally pushed Pins aside and called on some other men. Pins watched them leave the bar, armed with various weapons; he knew they had many more that were concealed. He took off his hat and brushed his hand through his hair as he went back to the woman. He’d mend things with Ted later.
“I believe that me opting to stay with you tonight has at least earned me the right to know your name.”
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"And you call my friends strange..." she teased as the last of the men filed out and he returned to the booth. With his hat off he was even better looking, now that she could actually see him. "What's going on, all those guys aren't flatfoots are they?" she asked curiously. She moved the soggy napkins to the side and wiped her hands off before offer her hand to introduce herself. "Jo-ann Hawkins...But I only get called that when I'm in trouble." she gave a crooked playful grin "Joey is just fine."
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"You don't have to worry about them," Pins nodded in the direction of the men leaving. "You could call them the cops, but they're nothing like the real ones. This bar's gotta keep from being thrashed somehow. It's got its employees but not all of them are waiters."
He moved a little closer to her, the attention he received from the other men had started to grow on him. He had never been a man looking for the spotlight but he could get used to this.
"So, what is it you do exactly Joey?"
Inwardly he hoped she never asked him the same question. To most women being a hired killer was a huge turn off. As he waited for her reply he tried to think of some realistic lies if she asked him. But he couldn't think of any at all, he just kept looking at her.
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It was then that she glanced around and saw the open looks they were receiving. She raised a brow and some would look away and return to their drinks but others would just look on, one even shook his head and Joey could distinctly read the swear that escaped his silent lips from across the dark room. She grinned to herself thinking of the 'Little Black Number' she had decided against. She would continue to save it for a special occasion.
She gave a coy grin and ran her finger around the rim of her glass. "Well I play piano...And I go to the movies." She never liked talking about her job. "Dancing is always fun, but the boys back home ruined too many of my shoes..." she paused and then added "You know, from stepping on toes..." she giggled some, her laughter like bells.
"So what do you do for fun Pins? Any nasty little habits?" she asked curiously, not meaning anything by it. She silently hoped that didn't come out too rude.
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He stopped all activities for a minute, even breathing. Just staring straight ahead thoughts ran through his mind like a freight train on oiled tracks.
A detective, that's what you are.
"I'm a detective actually. That's really the reason why I was called on to check out the noise."
The piano wire suddenly felt uncomfortable in his pant pocket. The Beretta in its holster suddenly felt heavy and he realized he had no identification to show her. Talking about her seemed like the only way he'd be able to avoid his own trap.
"I love listening to the piano. I prefer jazz, but I’m open to any sound really. I played the guitar. In fact the reason I came down here was to get myself in Chicago's music scene, I guess i got a bit sidetracked along the way.” He chuckled.
What was he doing; giving her his whole life story in a day? He just said everything that had any real meaning to him.
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She shrugged and took a sip of her drink, the tangy fruit at the bottom holding most of the alcohol making her pull a small face. She wasn't much of a drinker. "I think we all get sidetracked...we're all a little wayward..." She swished the glass making the fruit, ice, and whatever else was left swirl. She glanced to the bar where the mime sat with his back to then, most likely nursing a drink. She just didn't like him. Her eyes narrowed slightly at him before turning back to Pins, trying to recover her smile before nodding towards the door "You wanna get out of here?" she lowered her voice to be just loud enough for him to hear "That mime followed me in here...And it's not just the cancer kazoo that makes me nervous." she confided in him. She pushed the remnants of her drink away and shifted ready to get up and exit the smokey bar.
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I’m not sure where you want to go exactly. They headed out the bar, Pins once again keeping an eye on the dark places; it was his nature to be suspicious. What never crossed his mind was why he was so open with this woman.
They walked down the lamp lit streets, Pins watched steam rise from the sewers as they passed them. He pulled out a smoke and lit it. It had been ages since he walked with a woman by his side. Being alone or with other men on a night was usual for him. As well as being beside the body of a man and hundreds of dollars richer. Being with Joey was like a breath of fresh air.
He put these thoughts out of his mind and focused on her. She was elegant and witty, the perfect combination for him. They talked about their favourite songs and singers, bands and who they hope to see live on day. It was all going rather well until a newspaper, caught by the wind blew straight onto Pins’ leg. He picked it up and naturally read the headline and subtitle.
Mother and children murdered and robbed, father nowhere to be found.
Pins had seen this type of thing before. Somebody wanted information, valuable information. There was really no other reason to kill a man’s family and leave him alive. It made him sick. He scrunched the paper up and threw it away. He expected to be called about this. Even though Chicago was a world of crime he knew people who cared.
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"I actually was raised by my aunt; the old battle axe tried to bring me up as a lady, I think she wanted me to some debutante or something ridiculous...The only thing I will ever thank that woman for is all the piano lessons and..some other things." she tried to scramble to cover up what she almost blurted out. She didn't want to bring up the barbers blade she carried or her obsessive sharpening of it. They had been her uncle's and at a young age she had stolen them thinking her fluttery aunt didn't deserve such personal artifacts of the man that had made a name for her family.
When the newspaper caught on his pant leg, she was able to read the first bit in the poor street light and she frowned with a sigh. "Someone should do something about that. The flatfoots never can get anything done fast enough...Too much paperwork." she shook her head knowing about the miles of paperwork she'd had to rewrite to get one scumbag behind bars.
"A nice long vacation for those scum bag just isn't enough for me..." her distaste all too apparent. It was clear she didn't completely agree with the system, but she didn't bash the poor guys who worked the beat and brought home the bacon to their nervous wives...
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He was so confused, she was touching him now and he certainly didn't want to lose this, but at the same time he wanted her to know him.
But he had more time, he only just met her tonight. If things went well he'd see her tomorrow, if things went very well he'd be seeing her for a long time.
He'd tell her later.
"Why don't we just forget about this tonight Joey. I'll get on this tomorrow, I'd like to start now but once the papers know about it they'll want to know everything and, well it makes my job harder. It's been a while since I actually enjoyed a night off."
He gave her hand a squeeze. He wanted to get to know her a lot more. He assumed it was just physical attractiveness that initially got him to her, but he found out that their song isn't just one chord.
Every time he took his eyes off of her he began to think about telling her his secrets.
"Look Joey." He stopped walking. "I'm not a detective alright, I'm not so clean cut in the things I do. I might as well tell you this now if things are going to carry on between us. I'll understand if you never want to see me again. I'm a hired gun, I kill people for a living." He stopped and immediately thought how stupid he sounded, he needed to make things clear for her.
"But listen that's not all. It's not like I’m some lunatic murderer. I don't just kill. I know what I do is terrible and that you're probably sick to your stomach right now but I assume you; I kill those who deserve it."
Pins had never talked to anyone like this before, not even the other women he'd been with. He felt strange.
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She uncrossed her arms, shrugged, and made a face as if to say 'Oh well...' She reached up to touch the side of his face and leaned in to press a kiss to his cheek. "I am normally really good at spotting the liars..." That was all she said and she turned to take his arm again and continue walking.
She took a deep breathe of night air. "Well I should be honest too...I'm a typist for a law firm, very boring. But I guess we're in the same line of business, I just don't get paid to do what you do and well...I don't have anyone who would pay me to anything that I do..." she wasn't sure how to clarify what she was saying so she stopped, glanced around quickly and opened her clutch and brought out the black handled straight edge razor. With professional ease and speed, she flipped it open and stepped forward to slice a undone string from Pins' coat. As quickly as she had moved the razor was closed and back within her clutch.
"Just don't be scared of me, I like you and I know you're not a bad guy." she seemed to plead with a nervous face.
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He hadn’t felt this way in his life. Sure the women he'd been with had slept with him but none of that compared with this kiss.
All the heaviness of the moment lifted when she began to walk. Pins swallowed hard and looked straight ahead for a moment before turning to her.
"You've got some skill with a blade there Joey, you're smarter than you let on, you know that?"
Pins assumed she wanted to earn money as a singer and musician; he felt that she was not trying to look for a place to work hard enough. Either that or the owners of bars were blind.
"How could you not have landed a steady gig at a bar? Look at you." This was the first time Pins had actually looked at her body, he was amazed and opened his mouth but couldn't say anything for a moment.
"I find it hard to believe that you can't find a place to do what you love. Listen, come back to me to the bar; we don't have to go tonight. Just come back maybe we can get you set up there or have one of Ted's contacts find you a place."
Pins wasn't sure about having her in Ted's bar but he'd fight for it if he had to. He wanted to see her every night.
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