Introduction
The Earth...
The best.
The worst.
The Plot
It is 2067 and this world is not run by humans anymore, it is run by human's own creation, clones. Humans worked to form genetically perfect clones and now there are very few humans who are allowed to live on Earth, only those with a perfect genetic history can make it. Clones are genetically superior in every way, physically, mentally, and emotional control wise. Other than their superiority they are just like normal humans with thoughts and feelings of their own. When a clone goes to the hospital to be insta-healed for a broken leg, they find that there was a glitch in her genetic development, she needs to go. What will happen when this girl is on the run and finds secrets no one ever knew about? And a society struggling to survive. What shall become of this 'perfect world?'
Character List
|Name: Alana Jorgans||FC: AnnaSophia Robb||Age: 19||Gender: Female||Role: Main Clone Female||Taken: katisacat|
|Name: ||Age: 18||FC: Nicole Anderson||Gender: Female||Role: Alana's best friend and helps her, she's a very supportive friend and she's crazy for gossip|
|Name: ||Age: 20||FC: Bobby Lockwood||Gender: Male||Role: Leader of the hidden society of humans, a little rough around the edges but is a great ally|
|Name: ||Age: 21||FC: Aaron Taylor Johnson Angus||Gender: Male||Role: Soldier in the Clone Army, was once friends with Alana, we thought he was a kind heart and he believes he is doing right|
|Name: ||Age: 23||FC: Bianca Lawson||Gender: Female||Role: Leader in the chase, she is strong, tough and determined|
|Name: ||Age: 17||FC: Michelle Rodriguez||Gender: Female||Role: Talented young spy among other things in the hidden society, pretty tough|
|Name: ||Age: 19||FC: Avan Jogia||Gender: Male||Role: Mysterious guy who appears and helps Alana and her friend, he seems a little... odd, but he isn't unfriendly... who is he?|
|Name: ||Age: 18||FC: Nicole Anderson||Gender: Female||Role: Alana's best friend and helps her, she's a very supportive friend and she's crazy for gossip|
|Name: ||Age: 20||FC: Bobby Lockwood||Gender: Male||Role: Leader of the hidden society of humans, a little rough around the edges but is a great ally|
|Name: ||Age: 21||FC: Aaron Taylor Johnson Angus||Gender: Male||Role: Soldier in the Clone Army, was once friends with Alana, we thought he was a kind heart and he believes he is doing right|
|Name: ||Age: 23||FC: Bianca Lawson||Gender: Female||Role: Leader in the chase, she is strong, tough and determined|
|Name: ||Age: 17||FC: Michelle Rodriguez||Gender: Female||Role: Talented young spy among other things in the hidden society, pretty tough|
|Name: ||Age: 19||FC: Avan Jogia||Gender: Male||Role: Mysterious guy who appears and helps Alana and her friend, he seems a little... odd, but he isn't unfriendly... who is he?|
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Mark navigated for her as best he could while they drove. It wasn't long before they were in a back alley near the warehouse they'd escaped out of.
Alana pulled the hover bike behind some bushes and cut the engine. She slowly got off of it and looked at Mark. "Ready...?"
He sighed. "Yeah. Einstein should be able to cause a big enough distraction for us to get into position. Then give me a moment to get the power out. You'll know when to move. If you see any guards, do not hesitate to shoot. I know they won't." He kissed her quickly. "I love you."
Alana nodded quickly, glancing at the both of them, obviously worried. "Alright. I love you too..." She took off to get into position. Einstein headed to distract the guards.
Mark used the dog's barking to cover the sound of his footsteps, sticking to the shadows. He managed to get by without anyone seeing him. Before long he was at the generator and out of sight. He followed some wires to a fuse box. He cut the power to everything but emergency power, bypassing the alarm system easily. They'd be able to reroute some power into the elevator, but everything had gone dark. He took some glasses out of his bag and flipped a small switch. Everything grew bright and switched to shades of green. Night vision was activated. He'd go around and flank any guards within, hoping Alana had gotten through without trouble.
When everything went dark Alana was ready, she hurried down the hallways, her night vision goggles making it easy to see in the darkness. When she got to the elevators there were two guards there, walking around confused and ready to shoot anything that moved. She took a deep breath and shot the both of them, dashing past their fallen bodies and into the elevator, exiting on the floor Whisper was on.
Mark heard the shots and ran inside. He saw the two downed guards and sighed in relief. He quickly hid the bodies behind some crates. Then he set up post near the elevator and readied himself to take out anyone who came to undo the damage he did. "Good luck baby." He whispered softly.
Alana ran down the hallways, able to avoid running into anymore guards until she reached the room, it was deadbolt shut and there were three... no four guards. Three outside and one inside with her. Alana thought a moment then called Einstein to distract the guards and get them to come away from the door. She knew that gun shots would alert the one inside to what was going on too soon. Once the guards were gone from the door Alana began using the silent lazer to cut open the door.
Mark saw flashlights outside. He couldn't let them get to the fuse box. He tied a rope around some boxes and silently ran to a secluded part of the warehouse. Once he was sure he couldn't be seen, he switched his gun to silent and pulled the rope. The boxes toppled over loudly and the guards came rushing in. He took out the first three quickly but the rest scattered and opened fire randomly. He'd have to hunt them down one by one.
As soon as the door fell over the guard inside turned in surprise only to get a bullet in the head. Alana looked toward the other figure in the room. "Whisper...?"
The girl looked up from her chair. Her hair had been shaved like Alana's and there were needles sticking out of her skull. Her eyes were dilated as she stared blankly at her rescuer. She seemed to focus for a second. "A-Alana? ...No No. This is just another trick. You're not here. NO ONE IS THERE!" She closed her eyes. "I WON'T FALL FOR THIS!"
Mark avoided the shafts of light from their flashlights and moved as silently as possible. He only moved when they spoke or shot at something. He got close to one of the remaining guards and waited until he had a clear shot. snk snk snk The guard fell to the ground, his light rolling out of his hands and towards where Mark had been. But Shadow was long gone.
Mark avoided the shafts of light from their flashlights and moved as silently as possible. He only moved when they spoke or shot at something. He got close to one of the remaining guards and waited until he had a clear shot. snk snk snk The guard fell to the ground, his light rolling out of his hands and towards where Mark had been. But Shadow was long gone.
Alana hurried over to her and grabbed her shoulders. "Whisper. It's really me. And we need to get out of here."
When she touched her the girl grew hysterical. "No! NO! I won't tell you anything! NO!" She thrashed around in the chair trying to break away from Alana's grip but failing because she was strapped down.
Mark slowly circled his way up behind another another clone. Three more shots and with a groan the man crumpled. The few that were left began to get afraid. They worked their ways towards one another, standing back to back. They stood stock still completely silent, their flashlights searching every nook and cranny they could find.
Mark slowly circled his way up behind another another clone. Three more shots and with a groan the man crumpled. The few that were left began to get afraid. They worked their ways towards one another, standing back to back. They stood stock still completely silent, their flashlights searching every nook and cranny they could find.
Alana hugged her tightly. "WHISPER! IT'S ME ALANA!" She hugged her tightly, trying to get her feelings through to her. "Please. It's really me. I won't hurt you..."
The girl seemed a lot weaker than before. She was obviously just skin and bones and even her mind seemed dull like she'd regressed to being a child. She wasn't able to struggle against Alana and she suddenly quieted down. Her screams reduced to whimpers. "Please...please no more...No more..."
Alana rubbed her back softly. "There won't be anymore Whisper... I promise. Now let's get you out of here." She slowly began unwrapping her, holding onto her arm so she couldn't suddenly bolt.
The girl was almost limp. She'd broken down into quiet sobbing. She didn't struggle as Alana undid the wrappings but flinched if she moved towards the needles. They obviously were causing her pain along with whatever had made her think that Alana was a trick.
Mark sighed softly from his hiding place amongst some crates. There was no way to sneak on them and take them out one at a time. He'd have to either distract them or just try and take them all out. He looked around. The clones had been smart, they'd taken themselves to a corner and placed their backs against it. They were still close together but that wouldn't count for much. Unless...He looked into his back and pulled out a flashlight of his own. He began taking it apart as fast as he could.
Mark sighed softly from his hiding place amongst some crates. There was no way to sneak on them and take them out one at a time. He'd have to either distract them or just try and take them all out. He looked around. The clones had been smart, they'd taken themselves to a corner and placed their backs against it. They were still close together but that wouldn't count for much. Unless...He looked into his back and pulled out a flashlight of his own. He began taking it apart as fast as he could.
Once Alana had undid her binds she looked at the needles, she so badly wanted to remove them and relieve her pain but she wasn't sure what that would do. "We'll let Mark take care of those needles. Ok?" She said as she slowly helped her up as Einstein came back.
The dog was worried, he'd ditched the men but they'd be back any time and there were more around. Whisper had to use Alana as a crutch to even move.
Shadow hefted the light bulb and battery. With any luck it would work. He turned his gun off of silent and threw the light. It flashed extremely brightly with a pop as it shattered against the ground by the men. Mark ran out right after opening fire on the disoriented men. The loud noises and bright lights had them firing wildly around the room and in seconds they had all crumpled to the ground. Mark sighed and leaned against a crate. He hoped Alana was doing okay.
Shadow hefted the light bulb and battery. With any luck it would work. He turned his gun off of silent and threw the light. It flashed extremely brightly with a pop as it shattered against the ground by the men. Mark ran out right after opening fire on the disoriented men. The loud noises and bright lights had them firing wildly around the room and in seconds they had all crumpled to the ground. Mark sighed and leaned against a crate. He hoped Alana was doing okay.
Alana hurriedly wrapped Whisper's arm around her shoulder and hobbled toward the elevator, with Einstein trailing after them.
They could hear men shouting after them as they got on the elevator. But they were gone before the men could get there. Mark was waiting for them at the top. He smiled when he saw Alana, he didn't even seem to notice the blood seeping through his shirt sleeve and dripping off of his hand onto the ground. "You made it!"
"Wha?" He seemed confused before he saw the blood. "Oh. I-I guess I got hit there..." He put his hand on his arm and moved it up until he flinched. "It's just a graze...Whisper? What happened?"
"N-no...Not Shadow too...Nooo..." Whisper moaned softly closing her eyes and squeezing Alana's arm.
"Alana?" Mark looked at her, searching for answers.
"N-no...Not Shadow too...Nooo..." Whisper moaned softly closing her eyes and squeezing Alana's arm.
"Alana?" Mark looked at her, searching for answers.
Alana sighed. "They did something to her. I think it might be some sort of trauma. She thinks us rescuing her is some sort of trick to get her to spill what she knows. When we get out of here I'll need you to remove these needles too, I don't know how to but they're causing her a lot of pain."
He cringed, eyeing her needles. "Yeah, we'll have to get those sooner than later. The coast is clear. Take her to the bike, I'll catch up." He pointed towards where they hid the hover bike without another word and then popped open the controls to the elevator. He began hooking up his bank breaker to the controls. He was going to overclock the system of the elevator.
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