Snippet #1948100

Joanne slowly opened her eyes. She was still tied to the chair, but was upright and out of the water.
I guess he took a break.
She nearly drowned every time she was dunked. Her lungs felt like they were about to burst. She couldn't speak at all.

She started shuffling around in the chair, moving and moving until the rope gave some space and loosened up a bit. Good! She then started to slowly slip out. She managed to get free. But that was when the pains of nearly drowning took effect. She could barely breathe and move. Joanne staggered towards on side of the wall. Every step added more to the searing pain in her head and lungs. When she coughed, water and blood came out.
Not good. I can't fight in this state. I need to escape unseen.
Joanne moved towards one side of the room, still leaning and rubbing against a wall, until she felt a smooth side pass her shoulder. Huh?
She stopped at the smooth part and began examining it. It looked white like the rest of the wall, but I can feel a frame....like... glass? She raised her hand and began knocking on it. The sound of a glass window emerged. A window! Perfect!
Joanne staggered back a few steps, and then, with nearly all of her energy, ran into the window, smashing through and landing on the grassy earth outside.

"Hey, what was that?" Joanne's ears pricked up. The guards heard the window. She stood up and began to run as fast as she could. I don't know where I am, or where I'm going, but anywhere is better than here. When she reached her maximum speed, her lungs gave another large pain. She tripped and fell, landing in a bush somewhere in the forest surrounding the city. She had managed to run quite far from the lodge. They won't find me.
But the pain was unbearable. It was ridiculous how she was still alive. She was completely inside the shrubbery, but managed to look through the leaves and see her surroundings. In the distance was an old building. It looked like an abandoned factory. She couldn't move, though. She just laid there, lungs full to bursting, and passed out.

((OOC: Little help, guys please?))