Twilight, The Time Before (IC)

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:17 am

((Here is the OOC forum post537793.html#p537793))

Ian Vanguard ran down the foggy streets of Venice, looking over his shoulder every once in a while to make sure than nothing was following him. He had heard the laughing and the growling that was chasing him just a moment ago, but he couldn't be sure if it was gone or not. He kept on hearing whistling and running behind him, but the guy never seemed to attack him.
Finally, running into a brick wall, Ian heard malicious laughing behind him. That's when it hit him, he had been herded into a place where no one would find him. Turning around, Ian saw the large shadow in the moonlight walking towards him. All he could see was the red, glowing eyes in the darkness.
The creature jumped at him too fast for Ian's eyes to comprehend before he felt the jaws on his neck. He screamed out just a little before he felt the searing pain of his blood being sucked out of his body. Ian crumpled to the floor, feeling death's gate coming into him.
Suddenly, there was a flash of light and Ian faintly heard voices shouting, and he realized that the monster feasting on him was gone. Looking up through a haze, Ian saw a local gang from the area walk down the dark alleyway. Seeing Ian pale and disoriented, the teenage boys laughed and pointed fingers, until they heard Ian start to scream and tear at his chest.
Ian felt the burning sear through him, the fires eating at his insides, and all he could do was writhe in agony.

Finally, the pain stopped. Ian didn't know how long he had been on the grimy alley screaming in pain or where the boys that had seen him screaming had gone. But, really, that didn't matter at that moment. All Ian felt was thirst.

((Years pass))

Ian jumped from rooftop to rooftop, watching the girl walk in the alley below. He had surveyed her the whole night, seen her go to the party and how much she had drank and knew she was ready to pass out. She smelled good to him, and Ian never let a good smelling person last for long

AHeartlessNobody · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **AHeartlessNobody** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:44 am

The plot is good, but I hope you don't mind me pointing out a few things. This needs to be posted in the OOC forum, and you might want to make a profile skeleton for people so they can make their characters. Also the Vulturi were the blead family even before Carlisle was turned.

Anyway, welocome to RPG, good to have another Twilight fan!

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 11:10 am

((Ya, did a skeleton. Thanks for the comment.))

Ian saw the young lady stumble a few times and his lips curled back in an amused grin. He actually hated hunting prey that he had to chase, probably some sort of inherent fear from his previous life. But, he did love the chase every now an again, the certain thrill he got from bearing down on his prey.
Jumping down into an alleyway and landing silently as a cat, Ian casually walked out of the darkness and called to the lady in Italian, beckoning her to join him. His charms were almost undeniable when he tried his best. Ian actually preferred to seduce the victim, not having the sour taste of the testosterone in his mouth as he drank the red liquor.
So he waved with his finger, calling to her in his unnaturally beautiful voice and features.
The young woman smiled drunkenly and walked unevenly towards Ian, fully in his power now. He smiled back and put out an arm, beckoning her to take it. "Would you mind taking a walk with me, Senora?"
The girl giggled stupidly as she hooked her arm around Ian's elbow, walking with him down the dark alley he had just come from. They were both swallowed up quickly in the darkness. The girl seemed to sober up just a little as she looked at the grimy and dirty alleyway they were walking down. "Where are we. Where are you taking me?"
Ian stopped and turned towards the girl, smiling a dazzling toothy grin as he said, "Why, your gave, my love." She was caught off guard for a moment, before Ian leaned in and kissed her on the mouth, his hands caressing and holding her shoulders in place.
He could feel her heartbeat quicken for a moment and that made Ian lose it and his lips traveled down to her neck, tasting the soft flesh.
A short scream ran through the night, going unnoticed.

TwilightAngel · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **TwilightAngel** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 1:59 pm

(this sound cool too and don't worry im kind of new too)
(And yes I know the time setting, so he's not wearing the same clothes thats in the picture)

Name - Zack
Age - 16
Race - Werewolf
Sex - Male
Bio - When Zack became of age, he turned werewolf and killed his parents. After seeing what he had done, he ran away.
Human pic- (this but black hair)
http://media.photobucket.com/image/anim ... 1.jpg?o=48
Wolf pic-
http://www.watsonswildlife.com/images3/Black_Wolf_by_Carl_Brenders.jpg

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 2:33 pm

((Lol. I probably should have posted this in the OOC section, but oh well. Too late now))

Ian let the body slump to the floor, carefully wiping his lips as he walked out of the alley, a small smile of his face. It had been 5 years since he had first been turned, and he loved every moment of his new existance. At first it had been terrifying to see everything as a potential threat, even killing most of them to sate his hunger. But after a while, he got used to the new life, even enjoying it. It had been easy to blend in at night time, taking good clothes from the men he killed. He even had a small house in the slums that he kept tidy. The only thing that bothered Ian the most was not being able to go out in day-time. The pale-whiteness of his skin gave him away every time. But, it was natural for him now. He was almost grateful that the lone vampire had bit him...almost

TwilightAngel · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **TwilightAngel** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 2:54 pm

Moonlight crept through the eerie darkness and led the black wolf to it's prey. A small farm nestled just outside town. The chickens scurried out of the way of the hungry wolf as it reached it's prey, a desperate boy walking back inside. The dog started barking and the boy turned around to look. The boy froze in fear as the over-sized wolf climbed out of the darkness. Hunching down, the wolf lay waiting to jump. The boy took this chance to run and the wolf was soon upon him. Launching into the air, the wolf pried his arms away and began to feast. A gunshot rang above the wolf's ears and the father came running onto the porch. Running into the town, Zack transformed back into his former human self. The father came running by. Looking at him, he said, "Now you be careful now, ya hear? Theres a giant wolf runnin about." Saying this, he ran back to his son. Zack looked back. Another dead, another sin. Zack sighed and walked torwards the town, thinking of how much the boy was in the same sprawled position that his father was in when he... died.

AHeartlessNobody · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **AHeartlessNobody** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 2:56 pm

(If you two have any questions, just ask me. I've been here since June so I should be able to answer them)
Name: Melody
Age: 16
Race: Human
Appearence:

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:07 pm

Ian walked back to his humble abode in the bad part of Venice, Italy.
The sun was starting to rise, and he knew that it was only a matter of time before the sun cast its dreaded rays on him and exposed who he truly was. Of course, Ian could just have killed anyone who saw him, but it was less tedious this way; to just stay in and wait around until the next night.
A curse that Ian had found from being this new creature was that he could not sleep, which was extremely odd for him. No matter how often he would lay down and close his eyes or feel a little tired, he would not slumber.
At least it gives me more time for other things, suppose he muttered sadly.

AHeartlessNobody · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **AHeartlessNobody** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:16 pm

Melody saw the sun raising and got out of bed. She didn't have school, but she still always got up earily. She hummed lightly to herslef as she grabbed her keys from the counter and walked outside. Locking the door, she continued down the street, smiling and in a good mood. Things seemed quiet today, but she liked it. The only problum was there were clouds starting to gather in sky, covering up the sun. It might rain today..." She said quietly to herself.

TwilightAngel · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **TwilightAngel** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:27 pm

When the sun rose, Zack was already in town of Venice. The streets bustled as he tried to make his way to the shop. When Zack reached the door, a newspaper article was hung on the wall. The newspaper said something about a girl that had been killed in an alley. However, he was not interested in other's publicity. What had caught his eye was an article near the bottom.

Boy Killed By Large Wolf
Article written by Higgins

Last night, a boy was attacked by a "giant wolf" as
boy's father describes. The boy sustained large injuries
missing both his arms and bites taken out of his shoulder.
Taken to a doctor, the boy died later that night.

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:29 pm

Ian had been studying some old books in Latin, trying to fill up his time with something useful when he noticed something, the sun was covered. Dark and angry clouds had covered the dreaded light that usually kept him in recluse.
Smiling a sardonic grin, Ian started to get dressed, taking clothes from a pile he had in the corner of his house that had the least blood on it. Also, he grabbed a large-brimmed hat for his head and a Venetian Doctor's mask, one that covered his whole face in case someone noticed his albino skin.
Ian walked outside and into the day for the first time in a very long time. He had a small idea of where he was planning on going, but the intention was clear: he was going to feed.
Walking into the small market, Ian casually walked around, probing and inspecting potential victims. He always liked to pick the ones that smelled the best.

AHeartlessNobody · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **AHeartlessNobody** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:33 pm

melody walked around the streets when she saw a man she always babysat for standing outside of his house. Seeing the upset look on his face she went up to him and asked what was wrong only to hear that the little boy had been killed the night before. She gave her regards and left, sad to hear the terrible news. The boy had always been sweet and she never thought something like that could happen to him. She sighed, her happy mood gone as she sat on a bench and rested her heead in her hand.

TwilightAngel · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **TwilightAngel** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:36 pm

The market was busy as Zack walked around, tearing away the newspaper articles, before he had too much publicity. It was his daily routine, and the giant wolf was only a rumor, and he intended it to stay that way.

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:40 pm

Ian walked along, turning his nose in distaste. Although all of the people around him smelled appetizing, he felt he had grown above just killing anyone.
His tastes had evolved and it was only the perfect person that he loved to feast upon. So, he continued to walk around, pretending to inspect some food at one stall and then moving on as if he was uninterested.
As Ian passed a certain shop, though, he let out a loud cough in disgust. Just right then, he had smelled the worst scent he had ever smelled in his life! It was worse than dog, but more like dog and week old garbage in manure.
Turning around in a circle, Ian was tempted to kill the person if he found him just because he offended him so terribly

AHeartlessNobody · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **AHeartlessNobody** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:45 pm

After a while Melody stood and started walking around the small near by market. She finally found a small shop that looked as though it had some interesting thing and so she walked in and started looking around.

TwilightAngel · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **TwilightAngel** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:46 pm

Zack looked around to see that all of the posters were gone. He began to walk when an unpleasant smell greeted his nostrils. A dead animal maybe. Zack looked around to see where this smell came from.

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:54 pm

Ian saw where the smell was coming from and immediately started walking towards the perpetrator. He saw that it was a just a boy, an urchin, even. But the smell!
Forcing himself to walk slowly and carefully as to not surprise anyone, Ian walked a few feet away from the boy and suddenly pulled out a sword, one that he wore at his hip just for looks, though he could easily kill the child. "This boy took something from me!"
Deciding to give a reason for the killing, Ian pointed the sword at the boy.

TwilightAngel · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **TwilightAngel** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:01 pm

"Huh? I didn't take anything!" As Zack said this, the newspaper articles fell from the pocket. This obviously made him look guilty. The fact of this made him mad at how the odds were against him. He hadn't even done anything. Putting his hand into a fist, his arm began to shake. But, he was not afraid. It would be hard to pierce his skin with a bare sword.

AHeartlessNobody · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **AHeartlessNobody** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:04 pm

Melody saw the two, obviously about to fight outside of the store she was in. She quickly came out and stood between the two. She wasn't sure who was telling the truth but she wasn't going to let them fight.

Tathos · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tathos** on Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:10 pm

Ian looked confusedly at the girl that had just jumped infront of him. His mask that he was wearing prevented her from seeing his eyes, but Ian could see both of their hearts start to beat rapidly, making him more excited.
"Move aside, girl. This is not your fight, and I would hate for you to get hurt on the account of a mere urchin."
Ian took a step closer, his nostrils flaring from the conflicting smells of dog and something else he couldn't identify.

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