Naruto: Another story

[Thundergod1020]

holo... Find Kraft Lawrence and have him teach you a little about punctuation, I'm having a hard time reading your posts.

[holothewisewolf]

I have better grammar skills but save them for roleplays where I remember to use it.

[Thundergod1020]

Then use them. I don't rp with people who can't place commas where they're needed.

[Thundergod1020]

NightmaricAngel, do you REALLY believe the son of Naruto and Hinata, who is currently heir to the Hyuga, would actually be hated? I sure don't think so.

[Shadetree76]

Random thing here I can't remember is someone playing my characters sensai or is that done by me?

[holothewisewolf]

I am playing your Sensai and you are playing your Squad mates

[Shadetree76]

Cool beans thanks man ill keep that in mind.

[holothewisewolf]

No problem Shade

[Shadetree76]

Im trying to be Probed save me! lol

[holothewisewolf]

Thundergod1020 I have judged your characters for the Rudeness of you towards me and Nightmare.

[Thundergod1020]

There is a great valley between the concepts of rudeness and truthfulness. The truth I show witness to? Your lack of rp ability and judgement. I showed no rudeness to NightmaricAngel, only the statement that the KNOWN daughter of Naruto and the head of the Hyuuga family(even though the description to this rp said GENERATIONS) AFTER the Fourth Ninja War should not be acting as if she's constantly being abused on the street. If she'd wanted to be abused, she should have been a jinchuriki from a nameless clan. Your character acts as if he is just as powerful as an ANBU-rank Jonin, the sister of the Hokage AND A SAGE. He acts like a total dick to those who are trying to help him. If he was constantly a jerk with a heart of gold, he'd be relatively acceptable. But you just make his personality bounce wherever you wish. holo, take a note from your namesake. Act wise, act human. But be aware of other's ideas. Also, punctuation. It saves lives.

[holothewisewolf]

never saved mine goodbye.

[xXxZetsuxXx]

Made a Sensei/Jounin Character, awaiting approval.

[holothewisewolf]

god now that character sheet was impressive fair warning I do have a issue with sentence seperation.

[Thundergod1020]

Said the pot to the kettle.

[holothewisewolf]

go on go to manage your roleplay and leave us in peace.

[Thundergod1020]

Damn. Was Rin such a bad Hokage that they chose Tsubame for history's sake?

[holothewisewolf]

what are you babbling about?

[Shadetree76]

Sorry I disappeared guys i feel really bad about that with out any warning. Any way i could get a quick catch up?

[holothewisewolf]

not much happened Nightmare disappeared too as usual :( just when things got fun.