i was hoping you could help me with my bio

[shade of doom]

Name:Austin
Age:15
Sex:male
Race:human

Personality: cares for others and himself.he would do anything for anyone without reward

Likes:Practicing magic, and practicing with other weapons or fighting styles.
Dislikes:People hurting each-other without reason,and people treating others incorrectly and cutting them down by saying they cant do something and to stop trying.

Powers or commonly used spells: enchant weapon, summon animal,incinerate enemy

weapon(s): Staff of Magic, enchanted longsword, crossbow

Appearance:Tall, wears long navy blue robes, and no hood. his eyes are the color of the morning sun, and he is pale with average muscle, his hair was black with blue streaks.

history: Austin was born in an in-slaved community and everyone was walking around in torn cloths, carrying bricks, wood, and the man who enslaved all the people. If you didn't do what you were told, you would be torchered until you did it.He had to practice when he was getting water for the village.He practiced every day hoping to be strong enough to free his people. and after 2 years of pure practice he approached the kings house and killed the king in order to free him and his people.He has protected his home ever since.

[Riel]

This might help you get started.


If you want, I can break it down for you myself. Just tell me.

[mindless_invalid]

the easiest way perhaps would be to talk to someone over PM, a board or messenger and explain to them exactly who your character is, and then ask them to help you (NOT do it for you, because you will not learn that way) to write your bio.

if you'd like me to help you, PM me or add me on messenger, waterbubblebaby@hotmail.com, or we can just talk about it here.

But you will improve your skills more if, essentially, you write it yourself, with someone to help you.