Lyrics Sharing

[Nemmy826]

Well, the title says it all. If anybody has any music lyrics they've wrote, here's a forum to share them in. Remember to be respectful to other people.

[Nemmy826]

I wrote this recently.....my friend told me that she didn't want to ever see or talk to me ever again. Hopefully it doesn't offend too many of you.

Within my justic lies anarchy; a darkened corrpution for all to see.
A world without order, yet chaos complete. No time to regret, now rain down defeat
The shadows consume, for those now awake. Slowly my happiness it now slowly take.
My blood, so precious, now fades away. Only the sun is hope, to bring forth the day.
The darkness arise, dim now the cell. Welcome to anarchy, welcome to hell.

NOTE
I made this all at the top of my head, so please don't be too harsh on me o.o

[Miss-CCC]

Within my justic lies anarchy; a darkened corrpution for all to see.
A world without order, yet chaos complete. No time to regret, now rain down defeat
The shadows consume, for those now awake. Slowly my happiness it now slowly take.
My blood, so precious, now fades away. Only the sun is hope, to bring forth the day.
The darkness arise, dim now the cell. Welcome to anarchy, welcome to hell.

That's really sweet - thought provoking. I just sang it aloud to a random song playing on the radio. Happens to be 'I miss missing you' - The Saturdays (i think?) *smile* It actually fit! Haha

[Nemmy826]

That's really sweet - thought provoking. I just sang it aloud to a random song playing on the radio. Happens to be 'I miss missing you' - The Saturdays (i think?) *smile* It actually fit! Haha

lol thanks ^_^ I think :P well, if you want, I got tons more lyrics to share.

[Shō]

This is just a verse I wrote while rapping to one of my songs. It's not a freestyle though, because....that's only off the top of my head. xD


First off, let me tell you what my name is, it's Bats amazin', leave ya body layin' in the rain kid......hm, I'm only aimin' where ya brain is. I've been the sickest ever since I came in. So, I gotta be the hot-test, monsta eat ya body, now ya layin' in the lochness, you can try to get linemen to block this, but I'm guranteed to leave ya body layin' in the cockpit. I bet it burns, when that Glock hit, so yeah burn, like a hot spit. Yeah, I put the hammer to ya lip, I-I'll go ape, I got the bananas with the clip. Yeah....I'll have that hollow tip tear straight through ya body like pants with a rip. Bats. You can't grab my wings, I'm too high in the air, on my throne, like I'm sittin' with kings. Up in the sky, it's bird, it's a plane, nah it's just another dude baskin' in his fame. Mm, yeah, Superman flow, so hot I got my cash risin' up like fresh dough.

[Nemmy826]

I'm not one for rap, but still pretty good :D

[Nemmy826]

Well, got another little bit I wrote up when my ex-girlfriend broke up with me on our 1-month anniversary

Mirrors to the soul, for which I have none.
Your terror demise has only begun.
This love that we share, its only a lie.
You strive to be happy, but end up to cry.
My purpose in life, none yet to tell.
The job is now chosen to make your life hell.
My time now is over, my job is complete
Bind me with earth and lay me to sleep

Hopefully everyone enjoys

[Stone Dog]

well I am not much of a lyricist, I write poetry, but I figured I would give it a try. Please feel free to be as harsh as you want, I can take criticism as long as it is constructive and you are not just trolling :)

Always scared to see into the looking glass
Afraid of what I will see
When I look into the mirror again
Will I see me
My reflection has changed again
Taken down the paths of my memory

Who have I become now in the reflection there
Who is this man with a blank and empty stare
The darkness over takes my soul again
I cry out for help but no one even cares

What have I become
This time I am undone

The silver moon sets around me now
My reflection turns pallid and bright
As though proclaiming here
That now I have lost the light

Who have I become now in the reflection there
Who is this man with a blank and empty stare
The darkness over takes my soul again
I cry out for help but no one even cares

As I look into the mirror hanging on the wall
I see a demon grinning back and standing by the door
Black burning eyes of coal seen by all there
I scream a heartless cry but still I beg for more

What I have become
This time I am undone

Now I have seen it all in the looking glass
Reflections of who I am


and that is as far as I got >.>

[rabbitheartedgirl]

Focus, girl and bow before them
The corporate world is a whirlwind
And the wolves will always hunger
Baby you're not getting any younger

They'll chew you up and spit you out
Fill your mind with thoughts of doubt
To keep you pressed, locked up inside
And from the stress strength subsides

Just use your mind and heal these wounds
Address the pain but be back by noon
If you do not cooperate
Demons do not negotiate

They'll chew you up and spit you out
Fill your mind with thoughts of doubt
To keep you pressed, locked up inside
And from the stress strength subsides

You're just a face
Easily replaced
Don't stand your ground
And don't speak out

They'll chew you up and spit you out
Fill your mind with thoughts of doubt
To keep you pressed, locked up inside
And from the stress strength subsides

[B3Y0NDB3LI3F]

This took me about 2 1/2 months to write so... Here it is. It's called let me go

this is not what i had planned
you took me in
now i want out
but you keep smuthering
me into the ground

i used to think that you were cool
but my friends
said you won't do
i should've listened
but i kept lyin'
lyin' to myself

that you were fine
but now you're crazy
i was blind but now i see that
baby you need to

let me go
i'm through with all your games
and i can't live this way
it's like this everyday
just go away and leave me
oh
the things you should've known
that i'm not yours to own
youll miss me when i'm gone
but you'll get over
let me go

so now your all alone
but you just can't put down your phone
you keep callin
but can't you see
i left you
so let me be

it's kinda obvious
that i don't want you back
so

let me go
i'm through with all your games
and i can't live this way
it's like this everyday
just go away and leave me
oh
the things you should've known
that i'm not yours to own
you'll miss me when i'm gone
but you'll get over
let me go

you get caught up
thinkin you should be with me

but i know it's just a
game to mess with me

you keep talkin
i don't listen
oh please just stay away

(soft) you were fine
but now your crazy
i was blind but now i see that
baby you need to

let me go
i'm through with all your games
and i can't live this way
it's like this everyday
just go away and leave me
oh
the things you should've known
that i'm not yours to own
you'll miss me when i'm gone
but you'll get over
let me go
(repeat one more time)

[Nemmy826]

Very good :D definitely a lot better than what I can write, I'll give you that

[nightwolf]

ok so i thought i'd give this a shot after re watching the harry potter film i worte this song im not sure if its any good as i keep adding to it every time i re read it. it still needs work i feel but what do you guys think. i do have the abilitiy to write great lyrics but dont have the knowledge to put it to music.

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Scars may fade but memories will reclaim me
All those who died in order to protect

Who shall rise triumphant?

Wizards may fall and Wizards may rise
Yet I’m the only one who survived
Finding seven pieces of a soul
Was never an easy feat

A battle begins breaking down the walls
Stone armour loosening the chains
Hogwarts is threatend, protect us
Giants rising from the rubble

(spoken perhaps)

So many years ago
before love protected all
and destroyed the worlds evil.
The power of three Hallows
death itself was lost to itself
years of souless searching
found more than loss to each
till each was claimed in their own right.

(Sung)

Fighting against pain and memory
seeing those lost before me
they disn’t deserve to be taken
so quick, so cruel just falling asleep

(spoken)

An enchanted twig
a fancy stone
a peice of cloth that conceals all
together an amount of power
greater than death itself

(sung)

the last stand of green and red
beams directing towards my heart
broken down into a weakened hole
and rebuilt upon the strength

[tidus]

This is a more fast paced little song that I have recently named "heart attack". I tried to describe, and convey the feeling of realizing you just lost a love in your life. I think its pretty good as far as I can tell, havent put music to it unfortunately cuz I cant play anything :/ but one day maybe. Anyway, would love feedback good or bad.

"Heart Attack"

Feels like I'm choking on my own heart
the rush of blood blacking me out
can't shake, can't shake feeling lost
The world is so big and I am so small
stomach twisting, head is spinning
Can't believe this is the end
I can't believe this is the end
the end,the end,the end,the end

don't leave me for dead
don't push me off the edge
I still see the light at the end----------chorus
Don't throw away
all the we have made
I can't take feeling so sick
I still see the light at the end

That truck really laid me out
oh wait,that was you pushing me out the door
This can't be, can't be
I can't get up from the floor
my heart is breaking
my stomach aching
think I'm having a heart attack
think I'm having a heart attack
Attack attack attack ATTACK

-chorus-

[nightwolf]

i actually really like this song i'm in the process of putting msic to it using a site called punk o matic once it's finished unfortuanatley it has no vocal tracks as of yet but i've been singing it and it really works i've tweaked the lyrics a bit and repeated them, unfortunaetly i have to go out for about an hour but i will be back to work on my master peice lol well yours anyway.

[ViceVersus]

I really love that you guys are posting these lyrics - if you have links to videos or audio files of you performing these, then that would be even more amazing!

[chronicwin]

So i can't carry out a full verse but maybe i can i get some tips. This is my best piece for now:

He's got the blade, feeling sheepish
draws the blood, now he's squeamish.
His body's tense and life makes no sense
He's prayed to God, tried to plead
still no answer, so now he'll bleed
with each new cut it gets less painful
and each new scar feels more shameful
He's been so worn, he shed his last tear
he's an empty shell, no longer here

[biancacorgrott]

Wow, you guys are all so good... Ha, I don't even write love songs. Can't - never been in love. But I do have some lyrics to share:

Look at you
standin all alone
Why do you wait for me to say
You’re so very very close
oh

Now you wait for chances to come
You wait for changes to be done
Haven’t you heard it said that
journeys do not begin with time
no-oh, it starts when you find

((Note: Not meant to be a love song, again! :D))

[ArmMeForSleep709]

Well, got another little bit I wrote up when my ex-girlfriend broke up with me on our 1-month anniversary

Mirrors to the soul, for which I have none.
Your terror demise has only begun.
This love that we share, its only a lie.
You strive to be happy, but end up to cry.
My purpose in life, none yet to tell.
The job is now chosen to make your life hell.
My time now is over, my job is complete
Bind me with earth and lay me to sleep

Hopefully everyone enjoys

Dude, you're an extremely good lyricist. They're short, but there are a lot of bands that do this, so I'm not hating. What genre do you go for?

[ArmMeForSleep709]

I'm new here, but I'm a vocalist and lyricist, so I wanted to get some opinions. Thanks :) I really love all the lyrics I've seen thus far guys!
"A life eyond the seconds spared in my presence, unfurling unseen to me.
Maybe a last breath in my moment could forge an understanding.
Beyong my conception of reality lies an unseen mechanical clockwork that pulls the strings of every person I see.
Invisible strands connecting me to them, then simply vanising..."-Silence Amongst Syrens
That's part of a song I haven't yet finished. It's Untitled thus far.

[PulseTrick]

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-The lyrics to any song played on the didgeridoo.