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Just to let you know.

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Just to let you know.

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Sugarcake101 on Sat Dec 31, 2011 9:16 pm

Now you know how it feels;
Being walked on,
Treated like a broken vase,
Being bent until you break,
Clutching onto happiness,
You'll have to let go eventually.

You broke our promise;
Shattering me to,
You left me,
Right when I needed you.

Now it's my turn to laugh,
My turn to stand my ground,
I'll keep my pride;
I'll let go of you,
I'll destory the broken bits.

You saw this coming,
How could you not know?
I'll be that rain cloud that follows you around,
I'll be that shadow you see in the mirror.

Let's go back to the past,
You think you know me?
Think again.


This is just a rough draft that I've been working on for a couple of days. Toss or keep? If you have any ideas on how to make it better, please, let me know(:
Some say the world will end in Fire,
Some say in Ice,
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor Fire,
But if I had to Perish twice,
I think I know enough of Hate,
To say for Destruction Ice is also Great,
And would Suffice.

- Robert Frost. <3

Gir Loves You :3

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Re: Just to let you know.

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby #Chance on Sun Jan 01, 2012 7:00 am

Defiantly keep it Sugar. The words are powerful and it makes me think long and hard about the poem, what really got me was "You think you know me? Think again." So many times I have thought that and it reminded me of so many things. I think that is what I admire about you, everything you write makes me think of something that has happened to me or someone I know.
β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€” ѕтяιcΡ‚lΡƒ ΞΉc β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”β€”
The Rainbow Phantasm
A child B o r n o f t h e S u n is something [NO MAN] may grasp
For his H e a r t burns with the ambivalence of an U n c o m i n g D a w n

~
Don't try to tell me awesome p o w e r can corrupt a person,
You haven't had enough to know what it's like.
You're just upset because you [ wish ] you were in my position.
Now nod your head because you know that I'm right.

J E H R I C O |Dystopian Crusader| F A U S T

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Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Sugarcake101 on Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:30 pm

Thank you(:

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