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by Tramp on Sat Nov 24, 2007 3:32 pm
This is the rough draft, and pretty much the final draft unless I get some assistance (cough), of my compare and contrast, academic styled essay assignment. Feedback is very much appreciated, especially any type of critical criticism. I'm cheap; even a "U SUCK!!" comment will make my day. Please and thank you. So, without further ado:
Olivia, Once Upon a Time
Childhood memories are curious things; happy moments seem to always end bittersweetly despite how wonderfully they appeared long ago. Perhaps there is some truth to the clichĂ© âNothing lasts forever.â Yet that possibility never kept me from looking back and wondering what happened between me and my once angelic friend. When we were young, Olivia was unique and my dear friend, however we grew apart as we matured and she became a drug-addicted sheep.
When I met her, Olivia was unlike most other peopleâbut different in the best of ways. She had long curls of faded blonde and sparkling eyes of deep blue. Her beauty was a natural while lustrous one. She had her own style; her fashion, dyed with subtle colors and covered with such fanciful patterns as cartoonish dinosaurs, was mellow yet charming. She was a sharp contrast against a school population of plastic dolls--each one adorned with ostentatious labels from popular outfitters, fake smiles, and glaring hair dyes. However, her most unusual characteristic wasnât her appearance; it was that she would talk with the new kid that nobody else noticed to befriend. That is also what I remembered about Olivia the most.
Throughout the next three years of middle school, we became wonderful friends, but high school eventually destroyed our friendship as it had (clichĂ©d) broken so many others. To her parentâs divorce and my inevitable moving away, Olivia answered by seeking out new companionsâunfortunately, buddies that few parents would approve of. Drugs became a huge factor in her life, and her once petty addictions ultimately conquered both of us. Before, I was a regular guest at her house, but I stopped visiting; she was never home anymore, and only God knows where she was. I transferred to college at the beginning of my junior year of high school. Even as I abandoned her, I never stopped thinking about her.
Our lives met again two weeks ago at the high schoolâs homecoming game, but the girl I saw wasnât the Olivia I remembered. She had painted two dark mascara circles around her eyes that only could compliment her hairstyleâshort, butchered hair dyed a tainted black. Moreover, her old clothes were probably gathering dust in the back of her closet. To be frank, she now dressed like a prostitute: an oversized, black skater-brand jacket (size large for men) that casually fell off one shoulder, a black tank top that carelessly exposed her bosoms, and black denim jeans that fitted uncomfortably snuggly. Our eyesâmy eyes and her new red-tinted contact lensâcrossed from a moment in recognition. One of her new friends called out something at her; it wasnât her name, but she turned away from me voicelessly and obedient. The boy handed her a cigarette and she put it to her lips. It was the last time I saw her.
During the drive home afterwards, thoughts of Olivia haunted my mind. Years ago, she was the sweetest little girl, artlessly charming and apathetic. How could she become a zealously shallow, wordless, sexual plaything for punks? I could only hope that she was happy. In that moment when I stared deep into Oliviaâs hollow eyes, I saw a spark of tortured contentment. Caught on drugs, she may have been happier than she has ever been since her parentsâ harsh divorce. However, I donât know if Olivia really is happy anymore; I didnât really know her. As it turned out, I barely knew her name.
Knock, knock. That's what she said, mind you. And that's all she said, if you know what I'm talking about! And if you do, would you kindly tell me? Because I sure don't.
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