Howdy-Hey, Peoples. For my Trans-Atlantic cousins, an A2 is what we do in our senior year. For my English A2, we've been transforming poems and drama texts into traditional prose. These are the results.
A section from Rosetti's Goblin Market, in the style of Stephen King
It had all been Lizzie's fault, really. Laura, as much as she loved her sister, had never really understood her. She was impetuous where Laura was restrained, jubilant where she was sober. It was not that Laura did not enjoy life, far from it, but she was much more prim and proper when compared to her sister.
This was why Lizzie now lay sprawled in their bed, her face drained of colour, her body a dried, suppurating husk , no more alive than the lightning-struck tree that loomed over the twin's garden like some spectre of the dead.
The dying sunlight bathed the whole forest in shadow. The flowers shrank away from its touch, curling and wilting, as if struck by some foul ailment. Laura shivered, pulling her shawl closer about her shoulders. She could almost hear the wise, reedy voice of her grandma as she told, once again, the tragic tale of their dear departed sister, Jeanie. She could almost feel the steely glare of those dimming grey eyes, as her grandmother spoke to her of what happened to girls who went into the forest at twilight.
Laura had always listened attentively, shying away in fear as the Goblin-men paraded out of the story, displaying unctuous treasures to tempt virtuous little girls away from innocence. Lizzie had crept forward, her face lighting up as her grandmother related the curiosities of the Goblins with their cat-faces and rat-tails, their fat, furry bodies, and baleful green eyes. Her sister had never made the connection between fantasy and reality. She had always thought that these creatures of myth and tale could never hurt her. How wrong she had been.
The babble of the stream brought Laura away from the melancholic thoughts of her sister, as she pulled off the dainty white shoes that caressed her feet, and stepped into the water. It was icy cold, and she yelped, a hand leaping out towards the rushes to help keep her standing. The shawl slipped from her shoulders, and was devoured by the current, carried away down-stream.
Now clad only in a silvery dress of fine silken cloth, Laura stepped from the river, shivering as the sun finally dipped behind the horizon, plunging the world into an all-consuming darkness. The change had seemed almost instantaneous, almost as if crossing the river was the barrier between the sheltered lives of innocence and sisterhood, and the evil, twilight world of corruption and Goblin-men.
Almost simultaneously that the thought of the goblin-men crossed her mind, she heard the call. "Come taste our fine fruits, Come buy! Come buy!" It was not the words that disconcerted her so. It was the voice and tone. An overlapping tumult of scratching, wizened voices, not at all inviting, but Laura was drawn to it, her bare feet padding across the wet grass, the wind pulling her golden locks loose from her head, spilling them about her shoulders like molten gold.
She managed to halt the disembodied pull of her feet, cocking her head, eyes searching the impenetrable darkness ahead of her, for the source of the voices. The call rang out again, closer this time, the voices more joyous and triumphant . "Come buy our fine fruits, renowned across the land. Fair to taste and fair to eye. Come buy! Come buy!"
Again, Laura stumbled forward, panic spreading throughout her chest as the compulsion to see these otherworldly creatures gripped her. She faltered, before tripping and falling into a circle of torch-light.
Looking up from the dew-wet ground, Laura beheld the Goblins. They looked as if they had walked out of one of her grandmother's fairy tales, their heads broad and feline, with pointed ears and sharp green eyes. Their bodies sprawled out over their stubby legs, plump and covered in fur. The torches they carried flickered unnaturally, the orange glow making them seem half-real, almost ethereal.
The fruit they bore was just as magical as their appearance, sumptuous, oozing, delectable treats of every shape, size and colour. The sheer amount of this produce, and the rhythmic chanting of the goblins as they circled her, was a veritable assault on the senses, forcing Laura to her knees as the largest goblin she had yet seen stepped forward.
He was tall and rake-thin, with massive swept back ears and lidless golden eyes, like pools of molten honey. In his hand, he held a massive orange, almost oozing with unctuous juices. He brandished it under her nose, his pot-belly rising as he took a deep breath.
"What can we humble merchant men get for you, dear child? An apple perhaps, or one of these most delicious of oranges?"
Laura looked up at him, trying to keep her gaze away from the eyes, lest their lustre consume her.
"K… Kind S..ir. I do not wish to buy anything for myself, only for my sister L..L…Lizzie. She is sick to her soul, and I know that y—"
The Goblins had changed. They were not the creatures of whimsy and fantasy any more. They had become like their leader, tall, spindly with eyes of honey, that seemed to glow in the darkness. They cast down their torches, long claws sprouting from their gnarled fingers, fangs dropping from suddenly skeletal skulls.
Laura remained transfixed by the leader, like a rabbit at the mercy of a fox. She watched the orange in his hand wither and shrivel, becoming as dark and corrupted as the creatures that now loomed over her. All the fruit had become black, once unctuous juice seeping out like pus, tendrils of smoke rising from the silver platters upon which it rested.
None of the goblins spoke now, just sibilant hisses, long tongues flicking out from between their fangs. Laura staggered to her feet, turning to run, but they fell upon her all at once, ripping, tearing biting and clawing, pressing the poisonous fruit to her lips, the juice burning and eating away at her angelic visage.
She felt their claws tear the dress from her back, their rough hands pawing and ripping her flesh. They swarmed over her, driving her to the floor. Mercifully, her head was dashed against a protruding tree-root, and she fell into the all-consuming blackness, the laughter of the cruel creatures ringing in her ears.
Oleanna by David Mamet in the style of Hilaire Beloc
Jonathon
Professor who thought to highly of himself and got into a jam.
When his day's work was all but done,
John was chewing on his thumb
A fair lady did sit down before him,
Her face was plain, her waist quite slim.
She lacked in wits and was quite dim,
But John went out upon a limb.
He impressed his thoughts on to the maid
Her face began to look quite afraid.
John's tales of his life so fine,
Were carnal, she did nought but whine.
Biblical, John thought his book,
He preached until she slipped his hook.
The maid took his tale on high,
Where committees meet, and insults fly.
Pontificating from their ivory tower,
The Committee sniffed at John's grasp for power.
John was surly, when maid returned,
His face did look almost burned.
The committee took his house,
And rendered him, as but a mouse.
With every word he cursed and wailed,
But every plea fell and failed.
Her dulcet tones incited rage,
He stood, and threw her from the stage.
The message, dear children is,
Do not get into a tizz,
For those who think themselves so big,
People rarely give a fig.
Soliloquy from a Spanish Cloister in the style of Redwall by Brian Jaques
The sun rose over the dusky stone of Redwall Abbey, spreading the summer warmth all across the building, from the tip of the bell tower, where the great Joseph bell boomed out the morning, to the stifling heat of the Abbey kitchens, alive with the hustle and bustle of the breakfast preparations.
The grounds of the Abbey were still wet with morning dew as Brother Lawrence slipped from the gatehouse, pushing his thick spectacles back up his pointed nose, wiping away the last traces of sleep from his cloudy grey eyes.
As he crossed the lawn, in the direction of the great hall, a tantalizing aroma gripped him by the pointed snout, drawing him through the heavy oak doors of the main building. His sandaled feet pattered softly across the flagstones of the hall, which was slowly coming alive with the hum and buzz of conversation, as the other abbey-dwellers wandered down the staircase for breakfast.
Lawrence paused to clasp the hand of his dear friend Raff, a brawny otter with a long scar crossing his hardy, weathered face. Leaving his friend to the sizeable loaf of nutbread that he was carrying, Lawrence slipped into the kitchen, almost giggling as the warmth from the massive ovens washed over him.
"Burr Aye, Zurr Law. Wot you'm be doin' in moi kitchun?" The deep burr of the mole-cook Gubbio was almost as warm as the ovens as he dropped a steaming rack of oatcakes and savoury tartlets onto a counter-top, the massive padded mitts looking more than slightly ridiculous against his small wizened frame.
"Why dear friend, I was simply coming to visit you upon this fine midsummer morning, and to fetch some food for our guest in the infirmary." Lawrence had to shout over the clanging of pots and pans, and the constant buzz of noise from Gubbio's assistants. The mole-cook paused for a second, scratching the tip of his snout with a digging claw.
"Yurr, Oi 'ere youm, Zurr Law. Oi'm be preparin' a breakyfast for yon naughtybeast. You'm wait 'ere." Furtil shuffled off, returning with a simple earthenware dish covered in sweet fruit scones and nutbread, with an apple perched precariously atop it. "''Ere it be, Zurr Law. Boi moi snout if ee naughtybeast getten bettur viktles than us'ns."
Lawrence nodded his thanks, and staggered out of the kitchen, the heavy platter held in both his arms. The Great Hall was alive now, everybeast crowded around the long trestle tables, which were almost buckling under the weight of all the food heaped upon them. Lawrence caught the glance of the abbot and badger-mum Lorna at the head of the table, nodding solemnly as he headed for the stairs.
Raff leapt from his place, falling into step with Lawrence, a hand falling to the dagger at his waist. "You goin' up to see yon vermin?" The brawny otter inquired, a smile flickering across his scarred face. "The Abbot wanted me to tag along, keep 'im in check if'n he tries anything."
Lawrence nodded and the pair headed up the stone staircase, the heavy platter wobbling between them. Outside the iron-studied door to the infirmary, a swarthy otter waited, a javelin clutched in his arms. He nodded at Raff and stood to one side, pushing open the door, admitting the pair into the room.
The Infirmary was calm and tranquil, small beds made up with starched white sheets, pillows plumped and dimpled. The only aberration on the perfect scene was a dirty shape, hunched under a blanket, a thick wad of bandages wrapped around its arm.
Lawrence set the tray down on a side table, and approached the bed, his arms spread wide in a gesture of friendship.
"How are you, my child?" He spoke with a note of calm, friendship, almost the opposite of the behaviour displayed by the Otter, who lurked in the corner of the room, one hand on his dagger, and evil glare burning into the form of the creature in the bed. The rat twitched in the bed, his sinuous and muscled form wriggling free from the dirty tangle, snatching up an oatcake from the tray, gobbling it down in three bites. Spraying crumbs all over Lawrence and the bed, he began to speak.
"I ain't your child, matey. I'm Dingeye of the Wild Water-rats, and yous best be careful."
Raff lunged forward, drawing the wicked point of his dagger. "You better keep a civil tongue in yon head, Vermin. You're a guest of this Abbey, and'll be respectful to its inhabitants."
"Raff, control yourself." Lawrence sounded almost indignant, moving between the rat and his friend. "As a guest, he is entitled to our hospitality, no matter where he came from."
Lowering his weapon, Raff dropped into a brooding silence, stalking over to the wide window set into the other end of the Infirmary. Lawrence turned back to Dingeye, smiling warmly down at him.
"I've been granted permission by the Abbot to let you attend the feast today, but you have to stay here until then." Giving a short bow, Lawrence backed out of the room, Raff following close behind, flashing another glare in the direction of the Vermin.
--
Later that day, the rat stood at the window, an evil smile creeping across his scrawny snout, his yellowed teeth bare. Below him, in the sunlit grounds of the Abbey, Lawrence toiled away with shears and basket, tending the vast gardens, picking over-ripe apples and damsons, before beginning to prune the Myrtle bush, a look of utter contentment spreading across his whiskered face.
Looking on, Dingeye began to chuckle to himself, muttering in a low undertone. "I'll show 'em. Call me matey and child? I'll show 'em. Lookit that mouse. He's so blind, he can't see the forest for the trees. I'm not one of 'em, I'll never be. I'm Dingeye of the Wild Water-rats, not some mouse they can boss aroun'.
His thoughts were interrupted by the thunder of a fist against the Infirmary door. "Oy! Vermin. Get you's self decent. It's time for the feast."
Dingeye switched away from the window, stumbling over to the door, licking one of his soiled paws, and rubbing it across his brow. "I'm comin' matey, I'm comin'." He padded over to the door, checking that the knife he'd slipped from the breakfast tray was tucked into his waistcoat, before opening it, and following the javelin wielding Otter down into the great hall.
The huge hall was alive with the buzz of chatter and the clank of plates and dishes. Every inhabitant of the abbey was seated around a long trestle table, from the massive badger-mum, to the lowliest dibbun, everyone tucking into a vast amount of food with gusto.
Lawrence was seated between Raff and Gubbio, tucking into a massive bowl of lurid green soup. As Dingeye approached, a grin spread across the mouse's soup-caked whiskers, as he shifted up to allow the scrawny rat to slide in beside him. "Hello, child! Do try some of this soup, it's delicious."
Before Raff could even react, Dingeye lashed out like a coiled spring, locking his sinuous arms around Lawrence's neck, pressing the knife to his neck. The mouse's cry silenced the room, everybeast turning to stare at the pair. Many remained in their seats, but the more warlike among them sprang to their feet, reaching for weapons.
Dingeye giggled, pressing the knife further into the soft fur of Lawrence's neck. "You beasts are all fools." Lawrence barely squeaked, paralysed by fear as he was pulled towards the door. The abbot had got to his feet, casting aside the ripe apples and damsons Lawrence had presented him not a few minutes ago.
"Let's not be too hasty. Whatever you want, we can give you, just put our brother down, my child." Despite the calm tone of the abbot, this just sought to infuriate the rat.
"Don't yous my child me. I'm fed up to my back fangs of this place, and this 'ere windbag." As he spoke, Dingeye gently pressed the knife into Lawrence's neck, raising a trickle of blood through the soft fur. "All he cares about is 'is garden, and lookin' good. Same with all of yous. So 'igh and mighty, and good." Dingeye had reached the great oak doors by now, and was ready to escape into the night.
A dull thwack cut short his flight, and he fell, transfixed by the shaft of a javelin that had sprouted from his throat. Dusting off his hands, Raff paced over to Lawrence, scooping him up in his brawny arms, a smile on his face.
"S'allright now, Matey. Yon Vermin ain't gunna hurt anyone anymore."
Lady of Shalott by Tennyson in the style of The Big Sleep by Raymond Chandler
The body had been dumped in an alleyway off 4th and Lawrence. She was pretty, I thought. Pale and tired looking, but you could see that at some point she'd been beautiful. She was laying awkwardly, all spread out like Christ on the cross, the blood dribbling from the massive wound in her chest. I approached the rent-a-cop who'd found her while doing his rounds.
The guy was built like a brick outhouse, a .44 on his hip. He looked tough, but I knew his type. All talk.
"What did you see when you found her?" I asked.
"Nuthin, sir. Just her layin' out like that." His voice was gruff, but sounded false. A touch of the hard-man act, I suspected.
"Did you touch or move anything before calling the cops?"
He turned, indicating the set of footprints crossing the congealed blood pool. "I only got close to check if she was still breathin'"
I took a deep breath, controlling the urge to tear the guy a new one over tampering with the crime scene. "I'll need your shoes then. So we can eliminate you from the investigation."
The rent-a-cop nodded, and removed his boots, which I took from him, using my pocket handkerchief to cover my hands. I left them on the back seat of my car, on their side to preserve the blood. Now came the long wait for the M.E and an ambulance.
I walked back to the alley, pulling my coat around me to protect myself from the cold evening air. I stepped over the pool of blood, and bent over the body. The blast to her abdomen looked to have come from a 12 gauge Shotgun, at close range. The buckshot had torn her stomach to ribbons, killing her almost instantly. A cursory glance around the claustrophobic alley showed no damage to the walls, or discarded shell casings, meaning she'd been dumped here. Only time would tell who had left her here.
The screech of tires and the wail of sirens told me that the ambulance had arrived with the M.E. A photographer skipped around the scene, the flash of his camera illuminating the dim dusk, followed by the grim faced paramedics, who loaded the woman into a black bag and carted her off to the morgue.
I returned to my car, and went back to my dingy apartment to drink and sleep. Better to pick this up in the morning, with a clear head.
The next morning, I shivered in my overcoat against the frigid temperature of the morgue as the cadaverous M.E picked over the corpse of our Jane Doe. She looked even paler than she had yesterday, the colour gone from her pinched cheeks, her blonde hair spread out in a fan behind her head.
"What do you know?" I turned to the M.E, who looked up from the corpse, pushing his thick spectacles back up his hooked nose.
"She died from the buckshot. It severed her renal artery and she bled out into her abdomen. Time of death between ten and two pm, the day before yesterday."
I rocked back on my heels, absorbing this information. "Any luck on her ID?" The M.E pushed his glasses back up his nose, and shuffled the notes laying on a lectern beside the body.
"No personal effects, other than the Versace dress. She'd had sexual intercourse maybe an hour before death, hard to tell." He paused again, squinting at the spidery hand writing that covered his notes. "Oh, one thing, clean-up team found a ticket-stub in the alley. For Grauman's Egyptian Theater, on Hollywood Boulevard. Looks like it was from a premier or something."
I nodded, glancing over at the ticket stub. It wasn't much to go on, but it was my only lead. "Cheers Frank." I slipped the stub into my pocket, and headed out of the morgue's winding corridors, to my black Dodge Sedan, complete with the siren on its curved roof. Slipping into the leather driver's seat, I fired up the engine, grinning as it roared into life.
Pulling out of the nearly empty car park, I wove my way through traffic, the purr of the engine filling the car. It gave me time to think. The woman had been dumped in a designer dress, with a ticket to a movie premier. Maybe she was some B-list actress who fell foul of a mugger. That would explain the lack of personal effects. But the alley was over a mile away from the Egyptian, too far to walk. The facts circled incessantly in my head for the entire drive.
I pulled into a parking bay close to the Egyptian, slipping my Colt .38 from the glovebox, along with a ring-bound notepad, which went into the inside pocket of my overcoat. I stepped out onto the boulevard, pushing through a small crowd gathered around the entrance to the Egyptian. As I entered the lobby, I took a double-take at a poster behind a glass display. My Jane-doe was plastered across it, arm in arm with some sandy-haired youth. The poster read; Amelia Horrocks and Lance Michals in "King Athur" Premiering on the 14th of April, 1937.
I copied both names down into my notebook, and ventured into the theater. I stepped up to the box office and demanded to see the manager, flashing my badge to the gormless woman behind the counter.
He was a small man, with a wispy mustache and horn-rimmed glasses. I looked down at him, notebook and pencil in hand. "When was the last time you saw Amelia Horrocks?" He turned a little paler, the courteous smile evaporating from his face.
"Night before last. When she left the premier." His voice quavered slightly, and he looked as if he might faint.
"What time? Did she leave with anyone?"
"H-her husband. Mr Horrocks. They must've left around eleven." He gulped at mopped his forehead with a handkerchief.
"Did you know Miss Amelia well?" I asked, in the vain hope of uncovering more leads.
"I'd met her a few times. She's an old friend of the family. Convinced her director to hold the premier here as a person--"
I interrupted sharply, wanting to cut to the chase. "Did she have anyone who would want to hurt her?"
"I don't think so. Amelia was a lovely woman. I know her marriage was on the rocks though. I think she felt trapped by him. Married too young." He paused to mop his forehead again before continuing. "This film was really liberating for her, I think she really enjoyed working with Lance."
"Did you know Lance at all?"
"Not really. I'd met him a few times while setting the premier up. Seemed like a real charmer."
"Oh-kay" I responded, preoccupied with scribbling on my notepad. "Do you have an address for this Lance?"
"Three-Three-Zero-Two West Segundo Boulevard, Hawthorne, I think." I scribbled that down, underlining it for emphasis, before heading back to my car. It would be worth paying Lance a visit. He'd be able to furnish me with more on Amelia. And more on the husband.
The drive across town was without incident, and I pulled up on West Segundo with the sun pushing through the grey cloud. Lance's house was a pretty early 19th century town-house, with a short, white-washed frontage, and a sloping roof. What concerned me most was the green front door, which hung slightly off its hinges.
I got out of the car, pulling the Colt .38 from my overcoat pocket, gripping it tightly in my hand as I approached the door. "This is the Police! Come out with your hands up!" I waited a beat, then another. When no sound came from the open door, I wheeled and booted open the door, heart racing. I saw a bare hallway, covered in framed photographs, a pale hand with thin fingers hanging limply from an open doorway.
Bracing the Colt in both hands, I advanced down the hallway, my eyes jumping from wall to wall, looking for threats. The body was in the sitting room, crumpled against the wall, a massive smear of blood and bone fragments painting the plaster behind him. He was the same pretty-boy from the movie poster, sandy hair a few freckles. His mouth was twisted into an expression of pain and fear. I made a quick sweep of the house, glancing over reems of movie memorabilia, the tangle of pots and pans in the kitchen.
It was in the bedroom that I found the letter. It was still hanging partially from the typewriter, the mechanism stopped mid-sentance. He must have been writing when the killer kicked the door in. I stooped to read what he had written. It read;
Dearest Amelia;
I know how much you hate him.
I've seen the bruises. I've seen the looks.
He's no good for you. You're like a caged bird around him.
Leave him. Come to me, and we'll run away to England, star--
That told me all I needed to know. Stripping the carbon paper from the typewriter, I stumped downstairs, tucking the gun back into its holster. I spent a few minutes waiting for the M.E and another detective, before jumping back into the idling Dodge Sedan, and roaring off in the direction of the Horrock's residence. Time for me and Mister Horrocks to have a little chat.
The Horrock's house was cast in the same mold as Lance Michael's, a narrow town-house with long windows and a ornate front door. I left the car running as I climbed the three steps, careful to keep in view of the spy-hole. I reached up and took the ornate knocker, rapping on the heavy door.
"Mister Horrock, I'm Detective Rick Matherson. I need to talk to you about your wife." No sound. I took up the knocker and rapped again, calling out. "Mister Horrock. I need you to op--"
The door swung open, and I was presented with a small, unassuming man in gray suit-pants, with a green woolen vest pulled over his shirt. He looked at me with startled eyes, before ushering me inside.
He spoke with a high reedy voice. "What can I do for you, Detective?" I followed him into an immaculate sitting room, where he settled himself on the couch, leaving me an easy-chair, covered in floral patterns.
"When was the last time you saw your wife, Mister Horrock?" I inquired, almost casually.
"The night before last. She went to stay with a friend. We had a fight, you see." I nodded, producing my notepad again.
"Do you own a gun?" He paled slightly at this, but my stern glare seemed to set him straight.
"Yeah. A Winchester 12 gauge. I keep it in the porch." he rose to get it, but I waved him down.
"Don't worry, I can find it." I got to my feet, smoothing down the tails of my overcoat. The hall was as immaculate as the sitting room, complete with umbrella stand and a coat cabinet. I pulled open the door, revealing the bulky weapon. The barrel felt cold to the touch, and the weapon stank of cordite. I picked it up and examined it, noting the blood spattering the barrel, and the flash-burns on the muzzle.
I replaced the weapon and returned to the sitting room, where Mister Horrock was wringing his hands nervously. I sat down in the easy-chair, meeting his nervous gaze.
"So, why did you kill your wife and Lance Michaels." It was direct, but I was not in the mood to pussyfoot around the subject. I expected a defiant "No!". Instead, he broke down, head in his hands, a tired sob slipping from his lungs.
"I loved her so much..." He looked up at me, tears flowing from tired eyes. "She cheated on me. She was mine. Forever. I couldn't let her go. I guess that's the curse of marriage. We were together too long. Things got sour. This Lance swept her up. I stopped it before she left. I don't regret any of it."
I got to my feet, sliding the handcuffs from my belt. "Abner Horrock, I'm arresting you for the murder of Amelia Horrock and Lance Michaels. You have the right to remain silent."
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