Comments & Suggestions

Note: This is not the Reviews Tab. This thread is for suggestions and remarks on the more individual apsects of the roleplay and how they could be improved, not about the game overall, unless you have that many complaints(!).

Basically, if you have any problems or issues with this RPG, whether minor or major, please say what they are here and if possible give me suggestions on how I could improve these problems and issues.
Right now I'm a bit worried that I may be a bit too long-winded on the Introductory page, especially with the Character Sheet. Does anyone else see this as a bother?

Edit: Also, I've just put up a picture for themain page, what do you think of it? I myself definitely feel like I should use a different colour for the words.