The Prophecy of Raging Dawn

The Prophecy of Raging Dawn

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Introduction

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"When The Four Elements Of Rule Are Lost,
Three Demons Will Rise.
Life & Death Will Disappear,
In Which Four Humans Will Be Reborn.
But When The Demons Rise To The Fall,
The Angel Comes To Save Them All.
Within The Darkness Of The Night,
You'll See Their Souls Rise To The Light."


This, is the Prophecy of Raging Dawn. This Prophecy has been passed down from generation to generation in a book named "Raging Dawn". This book is filled with old blank pages, all except the opening page, which carries the Prophecy on it in neat, black ink'd calligraphy. The Prophecy has finally started, the three chosen demons have arrived to Earth and so has the angel of the Prophecy.

Now lets enter into "Raging Dawn."


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The Six Potions of Power have fallen to Earth, the potions of Life & Death disappearing out of sight, while the Four Elements Of Rule have fallen into the hands of four humans. These Potions were created by God himself to easily contain and kept safe the ultimate powers and elements of his precious creation, Earth.

These humans are now in danger. If they drink the potion that has fallen into their hands, they gain the powers of that Element, but, they also start to slowly die, for the the Four Elements Of Rule are not meant for mere mortals. If they drink sad potion, the only way to get it back is to kill the human and drain him/her of their blood and purify it back into it's original form.

The three chosen demons were all three created by Lucifer many ages ago, all three of them for different reasons. All three of these demons were once human, but something happened in their human life that made them decide to become demons. These demons are now going against one another to gain the place of the second in command in Lucifer's army, Lucifer being first in command. The only way they can do this, is by gathering the Six Potions Of Power and bringing them back to Lucifer.

The angel has been sent from Heaven by God himself to gather the Six Potions Of Power before before the chosen demons do and bring them back to God. God fears that Lucifer will use the potions to enhance his demons to be stronger and more able to defeat his beloved angel. Thus, he sent his strongest angel to gather the potions at any cost. The angel knows he will have to go against the chosen demons, and sees it as more of a side track than a main mission, his mind being set on fulfilling his duty to his God.

(The Four Elements of Rule)
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(The Potion of Death)
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(The Potion of Life)
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.:Human Roles:.

Human 1 - Female - Water Element Potion - Blue (dawnfire07)

Human 2 - Male - Air Element Potion - Pink (silverclawedmouse)

Human 3 - Female - Earth Element Potion - Yellow (Annalysa Jones)

Human 4 - Male - Fire Element Potion - Black (jadedragon66)

.:Demon Roles:.

Demon 1 - Male - Title: Lord of Torture (Church)

Demon 2 - Female - Title: Lady of Lust (Annalysa Jones)

Demon 3 - Male - Title: Lord of Nightmare (Thorait)

.:Angel Role:.

Angel - Male - Title: Head Angel (Tabris)

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12/30
Characterization: In-Progress Plot: Proficient Depth: In-Progress Style: Proficient Mechanics: Proficient Overall: In-Progress
Kurokiku wrote:This RP starts from a premise that, while in some ways rather typical of supernatural RPs, is something that in its specifics I have not seen before. So while the innovation was limited, it was effective, and I congratulate the creator on this. That said, there are a number of things which, in execution, caused me to score the story as a whole lower than I would have otherwise. While everyone's grammar, spelling, and punctuation were usually on target, the writing was very plodding, in the sense that while you talked about things that happened, there was no sense of the richness of the world in which it was happening. There were few if any notable appeals to the senses, and as late as three or four pages in, I was still having trouble telling exactly which character was which. A little more time invested in the posts to give them a feeling of place and character rather than just action alone would have gone a long way here. Also, a few of you need to be wary of autohitting and Godmodding in combat situations especially. It was jarring to read, for example, that one character stabbed another in the spine, and then for the next post to change this to the shoulder. Here, the first character should have indicated where he /aimed/, but not whether or not he was successful in hitting. That's for the second character to choose. Overall, the RP could use some work, but there were the beginnings of a lot of the things reviewers are told to look for. Keep honing your skills, and you'll be getting good scores in no time.

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Scyrim just laughed and threw up a hand and laisin was suspended in the air "You see my little turn coat you have my old power and i still have control." He moves his hand around and laisin floats with it scyrim goes back to chanting and tips the other vial onto the runes and the purple light intenseifided "The rite is done!" Yelled scyrim as the book and titania floated into the air and where zapped by purple energy and then hit the ground scyrim then turned back to laisin and said "Aww a birthday presant you shouldn't have!" He raised up a jar and absorbed his powers taking the super strength, fire and Bone armor even the madness. "Consider this a gift laisin." He said letting him fall. "Now leave fade before i make your life even worse." He then walked up to titania. "Welcome sister to the brotherhood."

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Laisin looked up "The hunger never leaves! I am not madness or power, consider this a gift." Laisin jumped on Scyrims back "Take your one madness! I will take your madness and everything else." Laisin buried both of his claws in the scales of Scyrim "Feed!" He sucked in a lightning fast rate retaking his speed strength and fire even more than before. He took almost all of Scyrim's fire breathing leaving only a small but intense flow behind then he just sucked out wild most of Scyrims sorcerer powers were useless for Laisin so he left that and began to take more immortality as there was a infinite amount of that. The hunger was pleased and jumped away only run of into the woods saying "Nothing will stop the abyss!" He laughed clearly insane and then materialized in front of Tabris "The hunger is pleased! You will be desert!" Laisin stepped two steps before he reclaimed his one mind "Wow.... that hunger is a mighty tool indeed, I think I just sucked on Scyrims powers." Then the hunger returned for a second "Do not feast! I will feast on your souls!" He then returned trying to stay calm "It seems it gets stronger."

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Tabris sighed, he was waiting outside the house, trying to think up a plan on how to get the potion. Laisin had now gone and was going to get power from his former comrades, ah well, better them that him. He materialized again, behind him still in his insane drive to power mode. Tabris shot up, his wings growing out from his back as he sent a shockwave of light energy to Laisin. It seemed to make Laisin snap back into reality, but then go again, before coming back once more. "How long will this insane drive to power go on for? Hunger is something which can never be filled."



Curse yelled as Laisin plunged the claws deep into his back and started sucking out his energy. He didn't have enough to fight back, so just wailed as it occurred. Luckily Laisin had given up on him and went towards Scyrim, although everything which happened after that was all a blur for Curse, considering he just blacked out completely.

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Laisin looked to the ground for a second after being hit by light although the hunger seemed to just feast on it. "It grows every time I feed or am hit by any form of magic."Laisin cursed and said angry "This is all Satans plan! I go with you until I kill you, you know that that is going to happen soon and you will not be mighty enough to stop me." The hunger came back and his eye's focused on the wings once more "Feed!" Laisin could just come back in control "It is getting stronger and stronger. Feed, fill the abyss of darkness!" He grabbed his knife and looked up wards "Just leave me! I cant stop it for long." He tried to stop it again and then it slowly worsened. Laisin materialized his mask and put it on its place. "Let us go, but please do it fast."

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"At the end of the day, I am an Angel and you are a Demon. We thrive to kill each other, but I am made so that I can kill demons, so do not worry about me not being able to defeat you, because I will do it." Tabris turned, he had kept his wings but folded them back, he was going to use them to fly inside the window. "Now, our plan of action is that you enter there first and do something to distract the kid, then I will enter through the window and take the potion. It is unlikely that he will be holding onto it. However if he is then take it from him before he can drink it. If it has already been drank, then we'll have to kill him..."

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Laisin looked at Tabris and nodded "I agree." The hunger was still pounding in his head but he Materialized with success in the house. He first spotted a man that seemed to clean the house, "Sleep, let it come to you." He made a move sidewards with the mans head so he go in a unconscious state. Laisin then floated a little in the big house, for a second did he ask him self if Starx was really here. He needed to distract the but he did not know the house. He stole the knowledge of the house form the sleeping man and entered Starx's room. The click of the hunger came back to him in a hit stronger than ever "The hunger has come!" He said it obviously insane and kicked the door open.

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Titania could somewhat feel the change in power, though she wasn't sure. She looked at Scyrim as he spoke to her and she picked up the book. When she did so she noticed metal covering where her hands were in a claw like fashion, and noticed black in front of her face instead of blonde, she remembered him saying it might change her appearance, and from what she could tell. Though, what she didn't notice, was the fact that her purple eyes now had purple cold flames coming from the outer corners of each one, though they didn't seem to phase her, nor did she seem to notice them. She looked down at her metal clawed hands, "well, that's...strange." She sighed a bit, relieved that it didn't change her that much. She looked at the blacked out Curse and went over and nudged him with her foot, "wake up Sparkles."

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Tabris

Before Tabris could say another word, Laisin vanished, most likely into the house. "That demon is going to become troublesome, I can tell." he let out a small sigh and walked closer to the house, standing at the wall to the right and looking up at a few windows. Tabris sighed again, stretching his wings out and examining them. They felt heavy to him, due to the power loss, and if he was in his Angel form, they would most likely be a dull colour. Tabris nodded to himself. "Yes, very troublesome indeed." he kicked off of the ground and flew into the air, usually he wouldn't have to do this, but the power draining from them, made him need a jump start. He landed on one of the window ledges, retracting his wings due to the fact they just felt heavy. Luckily the window was open, so Tabris just slipped inside, it was a bedroom, probably belonging to Starx, since it had a stuff a teenager would use. He began searching around for the potion.



Curse

Curse managed to shock Titania subconsciously as she nudged him, though the shock was weak, due to the power-loss he had experienced. He moaned slightly and turned onto his back, opening his eyes and staring up at the sky. He brought his hands in front of his face to check he was still alive, which he was. He then proceeded to sit up right, looking at the newly transformed Titania. "Titania?" he looked at her in confusion, wondering if it was actually her. Perhaps he was just having some strange dream...

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Laisin did kick the door in and it did clap open with a impressing hit. But instead of Starx there was Tabris, Laisin looked at him surprised "Where is starx? School? He looked to the on full power sun as it shined down on him. It seemed the hunger and Scyrims stolen power [want to forget the jar excitement] was giving him enough power to only weaken to his old power level. "Tabris if you were a human boy, were would you go? A disco or bar? Really I don't know. I am death for more than 800 years.

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Titania stepped back a bit as she was shocked by Curse and raised a brow in his direction as he question if it were her. She nodded, "jee, i don't look that much different do i?" Though, she found it a bit funny that after what had just happened to him that his first reaction when getting up would be to question if it were her or not.

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Tabris

Tabris flinched slightly as the door was kicked open, his wings coming out almost immediately to prepare for an attack. "Oh, it's just you Laisin." he relaxed and retracted his wings again. "Tabris if you were a human boy, were would you go? A disco or bar? Really I don't know. I have been dead for more than 800 years." Laisin asked this, but Tabris had no idea of the answer, he had been created by God and was never really human in the first place. "I think that depends on the human..." he frowned a bit, unsure of the answer. "Maybe we should try a bar, or something like that." in truth, Tabris was a little clueless as to what Laisin was even on about.



Curse

Curse continued to stare at her, amazed by the transformation, when he became a demon, not much about him actually changed, unlike other male or female demons. Curse shook his head though to answer Titania's question, he then looked around to find Scyrim. "What happened?" he asked them, confused by what actually caused him to blank out.

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Liasin was unnerved "Wait a second." He paused "I just felt something." The hunger began to hit him again "Feed!" He stopped in the middle of his way towards Tabris "That guy in my head is a complete lunatic, should I go and investigate what is wile you search for Starx? Yes, that is what I need to do." He began to walk in circle's "Great now I can hear him in my head to!" He cursed and then looked at Tabris "I know what I felt. It was a power wave produced by something powerful and Scyrim was busy with something when I attacked him. What could it be?" He paused for a moment "Feed! Fill the abyss! stop resisting!" Laisin could still keep him self together but he could feel the madness cover his mind as it had done many years ago when he murdered him self. The clouded mind and the need to run and hide wile only closing what he was running for, then the sword and then the small time of peace before landing in hell. "I see. Why should I? Why should I ever try to do what can't be done?" He turned to see Tabris "You may have known it but probably not. It the hunger that is the madness and the need for power separated from my logic and intelligence. I can't fight it." He paused for a long time before turning around "I will search his home for clues."

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Scyrim let laisin take the power it didn't matter the power would always come back beside he couldn't catch him if he wanted too the demon was as slippery as a newt... Still laisin to him was a pest needing him for a food source but he'd deal with that later He just watched as Titania and "Sparkles" conversed looking titania up and down... The change didn't seem that huge not like his but still a change none the less he then keeled down and looked at the runes he needed to see if any of the ingredents made it.

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Titania looked at Curse and thought for a moment, "um, i think Liasin was sucking your powers out of you or something. I think you just passed out because of that," she stated rather simply. She looked around, "and then he just left. Him and the bird are probably going after the other potions right now. We need to get one first," she said and looked at Scyrim, seeing him kneeling down and looking at the runes, "what are you doing?"

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Scyrim chuckled to himself and looked up to her. "Why one of the first things you are going to have to learn titania: Ingrediants are sometimes hard to come by always check to see if anything made it." He then scooped up some ashes left by the runes and put them into the bottle. "You are probably going to have to find a master to teach you the basics after we are done with the potions." He stood up and walked over to the corner of the street and studied the ground scraping his fingers on the ground and rubbing them together. "Welcome to the big leagues titania."

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