Introduction
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"When The Four Elements Of Rule Are Lost,
Three Demons Will Rise.
Life & Death Will Disappear,
In Which Four Humans Will Be Reborn.
But When The Demons Rise To The Fall,
The Angel Comes To Save Them All.
Within The Darkness Of The Night,
You'll See Their Souls Rise To The Light."
This, is the Prophecy of Raging Dawn. This Prophecy has been passed down from generation to generation in a book named "Raging Dawn". This book is filled with old blank pages, all except the opening page, which carries the Prophecy on it in neat, black ink'd calligraphy. The Prophecy has finally started, the three chosen demons have arrived to Earth and so has the angel of the Prophecy.
Now lets enter into "Raging Dawn."
The Six Potions of Power have fallen to Earth, the potions of Life & Death disappearing out of sight, while the Four Elements Of Rule have fallen into the hands of four humans. These Potions were created by God himself to easily contain and kept safe the ultimate powers and elements of his precious creation, Earth.
These humans are now in danger. If they drink the potion that has fallen into their hands, they gain the powers of that Element, but, they also start to slowly die, for the the Four Elements Of Rule are not meant for mere mortals. If they drink sad potion, the only way to get it back is to kill the human and drain him/her of their blood and purify it back into it's original form.
The three chosen demons were all three created by Lucifer many ages ago, all three of them for different reasons. All three of these demons were once human, but something happened in their human life that made them decide to become demons. These demons are now going against one another to gain the place of the second in command in Lucifer's army, Lucifer being first in command. The only way they can do this, is by gathering the Six Potions Of Power and bringing them back to Lucifer.
The angel has been sent from Heaven by God himself to gather the Six Potions Of Power before before the chosen demons do and bring them back to God. God fears that Lucifer will use the potions to enhance his demons to be stronger and more able to defeat his beloved angel. Thus, he sent his strongest angel to gather the potions at any cost. The angel knows he will have to go against the chosen demons, and sees it as more of a side track than a main mission, his mind being set on fulfilling his duty to his God.
(The Four Elements of Rule)
(The Potion of Death)
(The Potion of Life)
.:Human Roles:.
Human 1 - Female - Water Element Potion - Blue (dawnfire07)
Human 2 - Male - Air Element Potion - Pink (silverclawedmouse)
Human 3 - Female - Earth Element Potion - Yellow (Annalysa Jones)
Human 4 - Male - Fire Element Potion - Black (jadedragon66)
.:Demon Roles:.
Demon 1 - Male - Title: Lord of Torture (Church)
Demon 2 - Female - Title: Lady of Lust (Annalysa Jones)
Demon 3 - Male - Title: Lord of Nightmare (Thorait)
.:Angel Role:.
Angel - Male - Title: Head Angel (Tabris)
Reviews
Kurokiku wrote:This RP starts from a premise that, while in some ways rather typical of supernatural RPs, is something that in its specifics I have not seen before. So while the innovation was limited, it was effective, and I congratulate the creator on this. That said, there are a number of things which, in execution, caused me to score the story as a whole lower than I would have otherwise. While everyone's grammar, spelling, and punctuation were usually on target, the writing was very plodding, in the sense that while you talked about things that happened, there was no sense of the richness of the world in which it was happening. There were few if any notable appeals to the senses, and as late as three or four pages in, I was still having trouble telling exactly which character was which. A little more time invested in the posts to give them a feeling of place and character rather than just action alone would have gone a long way here. Also, a few of you need to be wary of autohitting and Godmodding in combat situations especially. It was jarring to read, for example, that one character stabbed another in the spine, and then for the next post to change this to the shoulder. Here, the first character should have indicated where he /aimed/, but not whether or not he was successful in hitting. That's for the second character to choose. Overall, the RP could use some work, but there were the beginnings of a lot of the things reviewers are told to look for. Keep honing your skills, and you'll be getting good scores in no time.
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Curse yelled as Laisin plunged the claws deep into his back and started sucking out his energy. He didn't have enough to fight back, so just wailed as it occurred. Luckily Laisin had given up on him and went towards Scyrim, although everything which happened after that was all a blur for Curse, considering he just blacked out completely.
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Before Tabris could say another word, Laisin vanished, most likely into the house. "That demon is going to become troublesome, I can tell." he let out a small sigh and walked closer to the house, standing at the wall to the right and looking up at a few windows. Tabris sighed again, stretching his wings out and examining them. They felt heavy to him, due to the power loss, and if he was in his Angel form, they would most likely be a dull colour. Tabris nodded to himself. "Yes, very troublesome indeed." he kicked off of the ground and flew into the air, usually he wouldn't have to do this, but the power draining from them, made him need a jump start. He landed on one of the window ledges, retracting his wings due to the fact they just felt heavy. Luckily the window was open, so Tabris just slipped inside, it was a bedroom, probably belonging to Starx, since it had a stuff a teenager would use. He began searching around for the potion.
Curse
Curse managed to shock Titania subconsciously as she nudged him, though the shock was weak, due to the power-loss he had experienced. He moaned slightly and turned onto his back, opening his eyes and staring up at the sky. He brought his hands in front of his face to check he was still alive, which he was. He then proceeded to sit up right, looking at the newly transformed Titania. "Titania?" he looked at her in confusion, wondering if it was actually her. Perhaps he was just having some strange dream...
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Tabris flinched slightly as the door was kicked open, his wings coming out almost immediately to prepare for an attack. "Oh, it's just you Laisin." he relaxed and retracted his wings again. "Tabris if you were a human boy, were would you go? A disco or bar? Really I don't know. I have been dead for more than 800 years." Laisin asked this, but Tabris had no idea of the answer, he had been created by God and was never really human in the first place. "I think that depends on the human..." he frowned a bit, unsure of the answer. "Maybe we should try a bar, or something like that." in truth, Tabris was a little clueless as to what Laisin was even on about.
Curse
Curse continued to stare at her, amazed by the transformation, when he became a demon, not much about him actually changed, unlike other male or female demons. Curse shook his head though to answer Titania's question, he then looked around to find Scyrim. "What happened?" he asked them, confused by what actually caused him to blank out.
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