Shadows of the Enlightened

[Blackbird26]

Okay... It's finally up. *cheers*

So... sorry for the long flashback session, but I wanted to make clear that what Jake did was somewhat planned before they left and not just something he came up with out of the blue.

With that said... I think we can handle a small army as well, huh? ;)

[Mr_Doomed]

Jeez! That was a lot of story being told there. It makes me even more excited to continue. I might do that later tonight or tomorrow after school. Probably tomorrow, but I will see if I can start something today.

[Blackbird26]

It took me almost 4 days to post this, so... I can't really rush you, now can I? :P

When I lost everything, the only thing missing was Crystal's part. Everything until then I had to write twice. >.<

Such a hassle... *sigh*

Hope it never happens again.

[Mr_Doomed]

This is really getting insane. I'm sorry I didn't use much of you're post as I could have, but I just had this idea and I ran with it.

[Blackbird26]

O.O
The knights were not supposed to reach the castle!

Aaaaaah!

*runs for her life*

[Blackbird26]

Posted. :D

All dramatic scenes require a little bit of rain, don't you think? ;)

[Mr_Doomed]

Once again, really good post. I personally feel like this battle is drawing to a close though. We have just too much epicness to really do much more than just finish the battle. What do you say?

[Blackbird26]

I say:

Let's do it! *thumbs up*

[Mr_Doomed]

I'm on it. It's time to finish it!

[Blackbird26]

I'm really excited! ^_^

I might actually lose a little sleep. lol

[Mr_Doomed]

Well lose sleep no more. It is up and posted. I think that maybe you create a response post and then we time jump to when we arrive back at the camp.
Tell me what you think of how I ended it. I did it for more than one reason though. It isn't explained in my post, but it is more a thing of symbols. I don't know how well I did on it so I don't know how easy it is to actually catch the symbols I was trying to make. Tell me what you think.

[Blackbird26]

It looks awesome. Completely and totally awesome.

It's one in the morning, I'm typing in the dark, and yet I feel so compelled to write a reply right now. O.O

For the sake of quality I'll force myself to wait until morning though.

Also... Yay! I think Jake gets to live. Heh.

[Mr_Doomed]

I can wait till morning.

[Blackbird26]

Not really morning anymore... But it's up!

One more flashback session, just for the fun of it. lol

You can skip now if you like. ^_^

[Mr_Doomed]

Great job, it was quite enjoyable to read. I just want to know if I can use Dani for my next post. I want to do some dialogue, so only if you trust me to so that I will stay true to the character.

[Blackbird26]

Sure you can use Dani. Go ahead. :D

[Mr_Doomed]

Gee, thanks! lol

[Mr_Doomed]

Son of a bitch! I just spent the past few hours putting something together and I really liked it. It got done everything I wanted and then when I press the submit button, it brings me to a login screen. The website logged me off for some reason! I lost precious sleeping time because of this!
I will have something tomorrow. It probably wont be as great as it once was. I lost all that great dialogue that Evin had with Dani. That was the most important part of the entire thing (in my opinion) and it was just so natural sounding. I will never be able to write it as well as I did then. I'm really mad right now!

[Blackbird26]

That's just... Argh!

And the post never turns out as good the second time around... *sigh*

Sorry that you lost all your work. It really, really sucks when that happens. :/

[Mr_Doomed]

Yeah, I've decided to rewrite the dialogue on a word document right now while it's still kind of fresh in my mind. The rest of it can be rewritten with less pain than the dialogue so I can write the rest tomorrow.