Starwars The Old Republic: A Beacon of Hope

[flying monkey child]

Hey, just put together a jedi character. Let me know if it needs any work.

[BilgeWater]

looks good man, he's in.

[reap13er]

I resubmitted my character (Gar Derant). I put most of it together last night thats way it was lacking alot of detail.

[BilgeWater]

wow... lots better man, one last thing though, i need a little more in the appearance area. If you can't come up with a clear description then i suggest looking for a suitable pic and being done with it

But yeah, fix that and he's in :D

[reap13er]

Ok thanks give me a minute and i will

Ok added a little to apperance and added a pic also

[BilgeWater]

Alright folks, Tomorrow we'll begin the Roleplay! what time? i have no idea but anyone interested who hasn't submitted a character yet may want to get it done soon, everyone else... I guess take the time to further flesh out you characters and be thinking about your posts.

Basically everyone is cramped on Zyras' Ship, all a little scared, and extremely confused. First step would be deciding where they needed to go next :P

[Axel4win]

Just wondering what is up with mine? I would help to know what is wrong so i am not fixing something that isn't broke

[BilgeWater]

Well i'd like to see a paragraph or atleast a few sentences in the personality and background sections and a little more detail in the rest

Also instead of a link to your characters pic use {img}{/img} instead, all in all he just needs to be fleshed out a bit more than what he is... when you look over the character sheet and feel that he could pass for a character that may have come straight out of Starwars, then you got it :)

notify me when you're done, and theres no rush so don't hurry through it

[13lazer31]

Submitted my character (Don't know why it took me as long as it did) And I hope it's up to standards.

[BilgeWater]

Due to the sheer amount of players participating here.. i have to revise one of my original rules. :P

i didn't really think of how the posting would work until now, considering we'll all be together throughout the majority of the plot, to reduce confusion and keep things moving smoothly all posts must contain a name, time, and date, and should be roughly between 200-500 words, although there will be exceptions for longer posts during dramatic moments and action scenes for those of us who like to flourish ;)

if anyone has any objections with this please notify me and we'll try to work out some compromises.

[Zombicide93]

Edited my characters armor and main weapon, Check it Bilgewater to see if its okay.

[zolzol]

SOooooo....we starting?

[BilgeWater]

yeah, sorry... busy day, im finishing up the last paragraph in the intro post as we speak.

EDIT: post away folks, and dont forget to include your characters name at the top of your post, we have quite a few people posting so it'll keep things a little neater. :)

p.s. Sorry about the random person posting... idk how he/she even did that considering i never accepted his/her character

[BilgeWater]

Also, for anyone confused about the layout of the ship

The Blue Rose :D



These can also be found in my character profile for easy reference.

[Robinwing]

Why is that thing making me think of submarine sandwiches?

[BilgeWater]

@Derek Smith: Please keep the posts moderate in length as we have quite a few people posting

[Derek Smith]

@Bilgewater: That was only 1500 words, pretty moderate if you asked me. My original draft of that post was 3500 words.

[BilgeWater]

Awesome, but we have alot of folks posting, and should someone be absent for a prolonged period thats alot of catching up so just shrink it as much as your able. Sorry for the restrictions and i hope this doesn't bother you too much, there will be cinematic areas of the roleplay where you can go all out with your 3500 posts, but for now keep it small.

[Robinwing]

I hadn't even realized the posting had started. XD

[BilgeWater]

im gonna wait for another post or two before moving further, still need a co-pilot and navigator in the cockpit for anyone who has experience as a pilot :P