Expressing Yourself

[reveries]

Okay! I submitted in mine. Seeing as everyone already established being a lawbreaker, I wanted to make mine a more dynamic character that'll change and be stuck between Regular and Lawbreaker..
I hope you like 'im. o - o It's also sort of wordy, so, uh. If you see any typos, or if you're dissatisfied with it, I'd love to know so I can improve. o u o;;

[stormwolf321]

I read over it and your character is very great. I don't care about the wordiness. In fact, I love reading about other characters bio. It's certainly very interesting.

[reveries]

Oh, thank you. I was worried for adding too much into one little human being. That's a relief.

[Grumpy-Converse]

Posted! I left out a few posts because they were obviously made while I was making mine. God you guys post fast! :L

[Grumpy-Converse]

Soooo,I'm heading to sleep now peeps ^^ Because school tomorrow :/

I know this is a weird question, but what age do you think I am? I'm curious, and it will start people talking more, and I like talking!


Well, hopefully, or maybe no one will tell me in fear I'm like way older/younger eg; if you guess 2 or 80.

A hint: I'm neither of those.

Or maybe for another reason. Yeah.

Anyways, good night! xxxx :)

[ReaperGirl4]

Submitted my characters! :D

[TwistedxXxAffairs]

@Grumpy-Converse,
I say 14. :P

@stormwolf321,
I don't mean to bother you, but me and reveries had a post that included your character. Sorry if it bothers you, I just thought that if you didn't see it, it would be alright for me to tell you. Of course if you wanted to wait on replying to it, then that's fine too. :P Sorry once again if I'm bothering you about it. ^-^;

[reveries]

Wow.. It's so.. quiet. ._. So, uh. Any idea how we'll all generally head towards the direction where some'll get get caught and all'll eventually share the same ideal of having the world the way was once was, or otherwise? o - o

Conversation material! :D I agree with Twisted, I'd say that you're around 14 too, Grumpy. :D 15, to be on the safe side. o u o;;

[stormwolf321]

Hmm... I'd say about 15 or 16 since I'm 14 myself. C:

It will probably be soon. You all can control the police yourselves. It all just depends on how the role play starts coming along.

[ReaperGirl4]

I'm seriously considering having Pan captured at some point, most likely told on by her sister, who will most likely find out sometime.

aaaaand.... 15

[stormwolf321]

That's a great idea. Certainly a plot twist. :) Also, sorry if my posts are coming in a little slow. Life has been hectic. Anyways, I probably won't have the time to post today. I'll try tomorrow though.

[reveries]

.. So, uh. Breaking up any awkwardness here.. I suppose.
Just wanted to say that, storm, your most recent post had a really great impact on me to how this roleplay's backstory is truly in dire and serious atmosphere. Bravo, good sir, bravo. * - * It was very well written and really helps back up just how seriously this society shuns the idea of anything that is non-profitable to science and (attaining useful) knowledge itself.

[stormwolf321]

Well, I'm glad you think that way. I did this in practically middle of the night so I continued to lose my thought process in almost every other paragraph, haha. We all know what that feels like.

[reveries]

Haha, well, it was sincere. And yupp, that feeling is almost as evil as the feeling of procrastination is.
It is a bit scattered, but I think that it creates a better effect on what the post was trying to achieve. And achieve it did. :D


. . . You know, just going off topic: I think that somehow, in the midst of this, Erlin has somehow developed a majorly and oblivious crush on Anaee. ._. I just can't seem to shake off that feeling.

[TwistedxXxAffairs]

I agree, I really liked that post. :D Though, I have to admit, I feel bad for the boy. ;^; It must've hurt when he got punched in the jaw~ :\
Ahaha, I'm glad you like her~ XDD

[stormwolf321]

Hmm, well it all can't be sunshine and rainbows. There has to be some action here and there to make it good and of course romance. <3

[TwistedxXxAffairs]

True. :P Hmm, maybe Anaee's next post, she could get founded out? I don't know, ahaha, do you have any ideas? :3

[stormwolf321]

She could. But since you haven't made any 'real' friendships with the characters then they would probably disregard it. Unless, of course, Erlin has a change of heart and stands up for you. Maybe Avastir could probably stand up to them as well. I'm trying to make it seem like he is gritting his teeth as he watches the laws and the people disregarding 'useless knowledge'.

Idk, maybe Erlin could catch her painting or something in that means...

[reveries]

On Erlin catching Anaee painting or something in the means - it could happen, but Erlin is made as character who isn't easy to befriend, what with his lack of understanding of how to interact with others. I'd give it some time, he's going through a shift in where he really belongs, as his law-breaking activities are only really starting now..
Well, if you do want to go that way, just figure out how to actually get him to be able to see Anaee painting/etc., the sympathy and the beginning of the change of heart will eventually come after he's stuck between whether or not to report her. [o w o];;

I think that if they all keep bumping into each other, a good three-way friendship will develop.. But they don't really have anything solid to keep them tied together, other than that they have some sort of connection to law-breaking, y'know?

We shouldn't be too hasty to get to the action too fast, or it won't develop properly and will get to the climax too premature. But, if you don't want it to drag out for too long.. Perhaps the government begins to search the city in order to "cleanse" it of anything "unnecessary" that they may have missed? It does exert a more heavy and timely issue onto the more law-breaker status established characters in this sense, but it could also cut off opportunities to fully establish relationships and friendships between all the characters, and for more reluctant characters like Erlin, he could shut off early and just side with the Regulars, more or less. But it could also make characters like Avastir more likely to decide on finally doing something about the gov'; so it would be a good idea in the future? Just my suggestion on the matter, though. o: .. I think I thought too much on it, though.

[TwistedxXxAffairs]

Hm, I guess your right. :P We shall wait until we bring Erlin out of his shell. We will attack at dawn! >:{D Ready your horses men! xP Alright, then, I will have Anaee to try to make friends and bump into people I guess. Though, I won't rush it. :3