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Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: Great job! That was a whole lot better! I'm going to start giving you much more freedom now by letting you choose this next scenario and topic. Don't tell me what it is, I will try my best to go along with it. ------------------------------- Next Assignment: Write a post. Put enough i...
by Mia Siserae
on Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:35 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: But It's Better If You Do; \-/IC\-/

Miss Murder certainly had looks and a voice that could kill, Blake noticed as he nonchalantly pressed his back up against the red velvet cushioned booth. With a bit of a smirk to his lips, the man to his right nudged at him to get his attention. The night had only begun and Blake already knew what h...
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:41 pm
 
Forum: Realistic Roleplay
Topic: But It's Better If You Do; \-/IC\-/
Replies: 64
Views: 1132

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and F16superman2

Tutorial Note: Much better! That was a great improvement on the run-on sentences! I still see a lot of "had"s in there! I also noticed that one of your strong points is in describing the setting. You're also very good at portraying the emotions of your character. Lets try a different scena...
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 1:06 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and F16superman2
Replies: 8
Views: 353

Re: But It's Better If You Do; \-/OOC\-/

OMG I FREAKIN' LOVE Panic! At the Disco!!! <33 I hope you guys are still accepting Name Blake Alexander Age 26 Personality Blake is very flirtatious which often gets him into trouble. He is extremely confident and almost arrogant in nature. He tries to keep a level head but is often distracted when ...
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 12:47 pm
 
Forum: Out of Character
Topic: But It's Better If You Do; \-/OOC\-/
Replies: 81
Views: 1814

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and F16superman2

Alright, we're off to a good start. You have some good ideas that would flow a bit better with the correct punctuation. For instance when you typed: She had been in her maths lesson when the secretary had called for her to go to the principles office, loads of thoughts had rushed into her head as sh...
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 11:36 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and F16superman2
Replies: 8
Views: 353

Re: Anyone willing to help?

Alright, lets get you started! You will find your first assignment here: rpacademy-mia-and-f16superman2-t9552.html

Please don't hesitate to ask any questions along the way! Good luck!
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:28 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: Anyone willing to help?
Replies: 24
Views: 792

RPAcademy: Mia and F16superman2

Tutorial session with Mia and F16superman2.

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First Assignment: Write a short post on the following scenario.
Setting: School
Problem: You are called to the principal's office
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:26 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and F16superman2
Replies: 8
Views: 353

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial note: Alright some new points to touch base on. As far as character interaction goes, when quoting another character as you did here: “Are you ok?” You have to copy and paste EXACTLY what they typed or else state that your character heard "Are you okay" instead of "Excuse me,...
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 8:09 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: Anyone willing to help?

Awesome :D Here are a few questions for you, what is your favorite RolePlaying Genre? Aside from on going sentences, is there anything else you had any questions about or anything else you'd like to focus on?
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 19, 2008 7:52 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: Anyone willing to help?
Replies: 24
Views: 792

Re: The Mug Behind The Madness!

Awww you guys are sweet!! <333 Melody, your hair looks short in the balloon picture!! And Tarayaki you and kitty are wicked cuuuute!!
by Mia Siserae
on Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:13 pm
 
Forum: Main Lobby
Topic: The Mug Behind The Madness!
Replies: 3617
Views: 190599

Re: Anyone willing to help?

I'm willing to tutor if you're willing to learn :3
by Mia Siserae
on Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:08 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: Anyone willing to help?
Replies: 24
Views: 792

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: Wow, I'm impressed by how quickly your writing has improved. Aside from very few misspellings and grammatical errors, I really have nothing to say about your post except that it was very good. Did you have any questions for me? Or was there anything in particular you wanted to focus o...
by Mia Siserae
on Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:21 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: Wow. That was an excellent post. I am awestruck by the talent that you have, good job Valkern! It seems that your strong points are around character background and environmental descriptions. The only thing I have to say about it is again the long run-on sentences and comma splices. D...
by Mia Siserae
on Sat Aug 16, 2008 8:59 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: The Mug Behind The Madness!

LMAO love the Vexar revisions XD!! By the way I think I've already told you this but Dani you've got some crazy mesmerizing eyes! I finally got some recent pics :3 Here you go Gateway! http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v145/Allenby/Mia-1.jpg And showin' some leg XD http://img.photobucket.com/albums/...
by Mia Siserae
on Thu Aug 14, 2008 9:00 pm
 
Forum: Main Lobby
Topic: The Mug Behind The Madness!
Replies: 3617
Views: 190599

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Encompassing, like things that are surrounding your character. Basically describe the setting. And yes, you could do a lot with character interaction in a setting such as a bar. You could drink, or bartend, or clean. It's all up to you :)
by Mia Siserae
on Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:02 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: You spelled my character's name wrong again lol It's "M-I-A" Aside from that though, your sentences are starting to become long again and lacking commas to separate ideas. I also understand with character interaction it's hard to get a decent amount of content in a post. To ...
by Mia Siserae
on Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:54 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: Remember when RPing with other people to not misspell their names x.x Other than that your post was great! --------------- Before Mia knew it, the race was over as quick as it had begun. She fell half a second short and came in second. Trying to catch her breath she swam over to the s...
by Mia Siserae
on Wed Aug 13, 2008 2:29 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

That was a tad unclear but I got the gist of it. I really liked how you put in a few character descriptions in your post. Lets try another scenario and this time I'll start if off :D I'm going to leave out the scenario and just have you RP based off of my post. Focus: Character interaction ---------...
by Mia Siserae
on Tue Aug 12, 2008 11:54 am
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: In your second sentence you shifted from third person point of view to first person. That's a BIG no, no in writing. Overall your writing has improved significantly! Remember to try and shorten your sentences. Next Post Focus: Plot development. Point out a problem and try and work the...
by Mia Siserae
on Sun Aug 10, 2008 11:49 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041

Re: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern

Tutorial Note: Remember to try and shorten your sentences and try not to use run-on sentences. Focus: Go into the description of your character's appearance ------------------------------------- As she let the order sink in, Mia wiped the sweat off of the back of her neck. After all of these years s...
by Mia Siserae
on Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:22 pm
 
Forum: The Academy
Topic: RPAcademy: Mia and Valkern
Replies: 34
Views: 1041
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