My intro

Maeve ran through the forest barely noticing where she was going. She came to an old cabin and decided to rest. She noticed now how the moonlight reflected off of the blood on her clothes. How her pants were torn and ripped. She noticed the huge gash on her leg. She looked at the stab wound in her side. She knew she would have to treat that first. Maeve took off the black leather corset she was wearing, she looked at her wound and then found some water to clean it out with. She wrapped it with the cloth she had on hand for such occasions, then went about cleaning the wound on her leg. She stood up and looked at herself in the mirror. Her long black hair was sticking out with a few leaves stuck in the knots. Her pale round face had blood spattered on it, and random cuts adorned it. Her silver eyes were shining brightly. She found a brush in a spare room of the cabin and fixed her hair before returning to fix her corset. Once she was done sewing her corset she put it back on, wincing slightly when it rubbed the wound in her side. Finally relaxing, she took some time to scope out the area. Two presences, human were coming her way. They must be who own the house.

One of the humans, a woman, starts to chatter.
"Did you hear about that new farm?"

The other one, a man, sighs.
"How many times will you talk about it? Just a building."
The Women stares in shock at the man. "Are you serious?!" She gasps, "It was a milker's house before! But, lot's of bears in the area.." As she says this, a gun fires and hits her in the back. The man jumps down.

Hrm, an odd sort of intro.. Perhaps you mean to start a role play in the Fantasy, or Realistic areas??

Welcome to RPG, though!

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