Sanctum Prime

[Setsugie]

So yeah I finally posted the char I had to re-do him 4 times since my laptop restarted, crashed or ran out of battery.
I think i may have when overboard with the techniques juts tell me if you don't approve(though I placed backlashes on them to make them more fair just in case) of them and ill edit them real fat I really like to join this rp c:

[SkyRight]

I think he's great! the characters you make are always awesome. :)

[SkyRight]

So, when does everyone want to start?

[Zentose]

Soonish I would think :D

[Setsugie]

Thanks and We could start know, but we could also wait... I'd like to start know xD Im anxious c:

[El_Gringo]

I'm on the lookout for whenever Sky is ready to start, whether we're supposed to be introduced in a similar area where we end up gathering, or just intro ourselves and start the journey. I've joined this and one other roleplay so far so these two first roleplays are my priorities here.

[El_Gringo]

Don't forget about tagging your characters in your posts. Not a big deal if you don't want to do it I guess, but if you do it puts those posts on your characters history in their page.

[Zentose]

Umm... zodiac? I understood less than half of your post, would you mind working on your grammar?

It'll be really difficult to interact with you later on if I can't even understand what it is you're saying...

[Totoro]

Yeah, I agree with Zentose too. I sort of understood bits and chunks.
I think she's trying to act and speak the way her character does? *shrugs*

[WadeJackel]

Just needs a spell check. That's the only pet peeve about this site, needs a spell checker.

One thing though, when is this story suppose to take place? Ive noticed a few modern phrases being used, it was my impression that this was a fantasy medieval kind of world.

[SkyRight]

yeah, that was kinda the idea. Sometime around the medieval times, or renaissance, though Vera's science and technology is more around the level of the industrial revolution.

[WadeJackel]

Think Im gonna have to bow out of this one guys, too many projects going on at once, my own rpgs (4 of them), research for a long form story or book Im interested in writting. Thought Id do it before contributing anything, dont like to just dissapear from rpgs.

[SkyRight]

ah! sorry to see you go! good luck with your story!

[WadeJackel]

Thanx, maybe Ill join your next one :)

[Zentose]

Okay, Dragon, how exactly did Demeter get past the guards? You're too vague...

I mean just saying shes a master at stealth doesn't do anything, even a master of stealth couldn't get through a gate with two standing guards in broad daylight...

[El_Gringo]

I'll be posting tonight or tomorrow. Don't forget you can tag your character in your posts too, and any other characters involved.

[SkyRight]

hey zodiak, I'm having a little trouble understanding your posts. Could you edit them a little more from now on? Possibly reread or spell check them or something before you post?

[Zentose]

Reading the posts out loud really helps, because you catch more errors with your ears than your eyes, just a bit of advice.

[Totoro]

Sad to say that I'll be moving within the next couple of weeks and might not be able to post as often as I do now. Don't worry, I'm not dropping out, just want to give you guys a heads up. If I randomly stop posting it means that I'm busy and the new house I'm moving in probably won't have internet for a while xP
Will try to post as much as I can this week and next week before I move

PS. Try not to do too much while I'm gone ;P

[El_Gringo]

Well that is good news for me then, I've barely posted, so I can catch up :p.

I'll be a latecomer to the party as far as mixing in with the rest, which is part of the main reason I'm holding off a little. Plus I want to make sure that when I post I have read all of your guy's posts and I'm not just throwing crap out there, I haven't read everything yet.