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by Rin on Sat Jul 07, 2007 7:08 am
She watched the man leave indifferently, letting her eyes come into focus, but kept slipping back into near unconsciousness.
The old man hobbled over to counter in the kitchen, hurriedly pulling out bottles and jars, this and that. He mixed ingredients together into a tall clear glass, producing a sludgy green concoction with a very horrid odor. He glanced over his shoulder briefly before muttering to himself, "...just waltzes right in then out...it's through my help that boy...remedies and the such...hmph...leaving a dying girl in mere seconds...!" On that note, the old man went back to the bleeding girl, steadied her head, and dispatched the lumpy swamp green liquid down her throat.
Lilith, although weary, pulled her face away from the intrusion, spitting some of it out and making a sound of disgust.
The old man huffed, "Of course it tastes terrible!! It's not a tropical smoothie! Now if you want to live, girl, I suggest you drink!" He placed a firmer grip on her head while she reluctantly opened back up, taking the rest down like a champ.
The old man placed her head on the table and went in search of a rag and towels.
Lilith stared at the ceiling encased in a shadow of darkness, her arms tingling and the taste of the concoction in the back of her mouth. It was bitter. However, immediately she felt a surge of life go through her, a welcome energy. She sat up slowly and pulled up the bloodied sleeves of her shirt. What was left of the large gashes she had dug there was but a dull maroon line, fading scars.
"How...?" She spoke in wonder, flipping her arms over and inspecting her arms.
"Best not to question it." The old man said gruffly, dropping a towel in her lap. Lilith jumped down from the table from surprise, catching the towel from falling.
"Go ahead and clean yourself up. The bathroom is down the hall to the left." He spoke, going to work at cleaning the table of her spilled blood that had touched the surface only moments ago.
Lilith didn't know what to say, speechless, but uttered a soft, "Thank you."
"Bah!" The man waved her away. "Think nothing of it. Now go clean up. Won't have you dirtying up the place!"
She went down the hall and found the bathroom slightly embarassed and found a small cramped little bathroom with a tub, sink, mirror, window, and toilet. The door squeaked when she closed it. She locked the door and put the towel down by the sink. Looking into the mirror closely, she saw splatters of blood on her pale skin, and some dried blood in the tips of her hair. Her green and red eyes peered into the mysteries of the mirror as she wiped a hand at her short, ruffled brown hair.
She sighed. Then she washed her face in the sink and went to turn on the faucet, still feeling quite weary and exhausted. I guess that drink doesn't cure ALL of it... But she was in wonder. She grabbed the hem of her shirt and raised it, showing a delicate stomach and the outlines of her ribs, but stopped suddenly, letting the shirt drop back down. Not again! She grabbed the sink edge and stepped back from the tub, as if this would help her escape the spirit. But she never sensed or saw the spirit. When she felt it, it would always be in her, sending off it's strongest feelings and occasionally controlling her movements. It's much stronger this time... She grabbed her head and leaned over the sink, a sharp pain in her head. No! She struggled mentally with the thing, but it was as if she were giving herself over, so easy was she taken over.
In the silver reflection of the faucet, Lilith's one green eye turned red, giving her a set of matching bloody eyes. "Lilith" stood, her hands dropping to her side, the water still running...She walked to the window, turning the lock, and opened it. A breeze ruffled the white lace curtains surrounding it as she swung her leg out and pulled herself out of the house. Zombie-like, she walked forward, steadily making distance to her destination. In a small part of her mind, Lilith was shouting, NO! All the spirit wanted was to be in that place with all the others. It wanted to move on. But why take me!?
This is the challenge of writing. You have to be very emotionally engaged in what you’re doing, or it comes out flat. You can’t fake your way through this.
-Real Life Preacher
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