AVP: Embers Of Fate

R.T.M.X. · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **R.T.M.X.** on Sun Dec 23, 2012 3:48 pm

I'm sticking with Amelia on this one, even though I might add Nracha-dte in as well, possibly later on into the storyline though.

Captain Obvious · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Captain Obvious** on Sun Dec 23, 2012 10:24 pm

Alright then, I'll be making a marine. I should have him finished sometime tomorrow.

Raidose · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Raidose** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 2:01 am

Hey, I'd like to make like the head huncho of the city if that's alright. Kinda like Weyland's go-to guy involving this place. Real ass hole King Pin type. Is that alright? Oh, and I was thinking about a name for it, like Arcadia or Elysium City.

Endgame · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Endgame** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 9:14 am

go right ahead man, and you call name the city.... the only name I had was The Baltroid colony... so yeah go ahead and name it.

Raidose · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Raidose** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 10:56 am

You can't see the eyes of the demon, until him come callin'.

Nooooooooooooo! You said it wrong! It's "You can't see da eyes o' da demon... till him come callin'." You gotta get the bad Jamaican accent in there!

Huh..... usually the Hish despise Yautja. This is going to be.... interesting to say the least.

Endgame · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Endgame** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 11:10 am

Ehhhhhh, I'm from Texas not Jamaica.

Tylerjohnny1 · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tylerjohnny1** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 11:11 am

Wait, raid... RTMX is the one..with THE signature? Badass. Anyway, I finished both my alien and my marine, thinking about making a predator, but idk. Can't wait to start, although a few more people would be nice.

Endgame · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Endgame** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 11:27 am

Acutely Raid, Super Predators and Hish are two completely different pred sub-species, while they share some traits, super preds make their tech themselves while the hish steal from other species, also Super Predators are more reptilian than Hish (Hish usually look more similar to a Jungle Hunter) and to point out Super Predators were just created back in 2010 specifically for the movie Predators, while Dark Horse created the Hish to be a variant of the normal Predator, also most Hish are much taller than Thern and Super Preds are is but you have one part right, Supers and normal preds don't always see eye to eye but can get along better than Hish and other Preds, also to point out, while Hish have a normal pred jaw, Supers have more elongated jaws and heads, plus there is no reference between the two species and dark horse has not claimed Hish to be Super Preds meaning there is a difference.

To show they are completely different in sub-species look here:

http://avp.wikia.com/wiki/Super_Predator

http://avp.wikia.com/wiki/Hish

Raidose · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Raidose** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:09 pm

Okay...... so what's the downside of the Super Predators? I mean, Hish have that berserker gland, so what's with the supers?

Oh, and they weren't bigger than Yautja. In fact, your guy is the size of a Hish. Mr. Black A.K.A. the Berserker was only 7'4". So your 8'4" guy is like..... a fucking giant.

Endgame · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Endgame** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:26 pm

well most preds range in size from 7'4-7'5 and then you have some pred like R.T.M.X mentioned that are 8'2 average height and up (going of novel height), there really isn't a set size because there is preds that are in those heights already though my guy is pretty big might size down a bit but honestly compared to some preds, that's a normal size, but will still down size him.

Tylerjohnny1 · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tylerjohnny1** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:46 pm

Wow, Thern and Red are really similar. If they weren't different sub-species, the could almost be twins. Only Thern is a taller version.

R.T.M.X. · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **R.T.M.X.** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:48 pm

And yet, they're small compared to Nracha-dte, when he decides to come in.

Raidose · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Raidose** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 12:48 pm

Yeah...... Uh.... wow. I'm reading over Thern and..... there are a lot of similarities to Ni'Charak. I mean..... a lot. Like..... even the shield. Well, you have two, so.... it kinda feels like you took Ni'Charak and upgraded off of him. Not saying that's what you did, but it really feels like it.

Endgame · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Endgame** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 1:05 pm

I wasn't trying to copy anything man and the only Idea I kinda borrowed was the Bandolier (just a cool idea you had to carry stuff so yeah kinda made of with that).... so I will make some big changes there to differate, the sheilds were from AVP:R and the rest of my weapons are ones I like in general, anyway will make changes there to make some differences, though the reason I chose him to have the red dreads was because I always like the Breserkers in the move and it just looks really cool and the other stuff I really don't know how it turned out the same, really was just taking the things I like in different preds from the movies and putting them togather, but anyways I'm sorry about how it ended up so similar and I wasn't trying to copy anyone here.

R.T.M.X. · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **R.T.M.X.** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 1:21 pm

Eh. We got three (four) juggernauts for the Yautja, with one being a human/Yautja translator. The chances of us surviving this is going to be good.

And the good thing is that none of us are going to be trying to kill each other!

Endgame · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Endgame** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 1:29 pm

well, I'm sizing down, and changing thing, though again raid sorry for coming close to your character wasn't trying to copy and if I was copying anything, it was Mr.blacks facial and skin features (I like the coloration)

Oh a R.T.M.X I'm bring in a marine and prealien to level the playing field a bit

Tylerjohnny1 · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tylerjohnny1** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 2:07 pm

And just because you're all predators, doesn't mean you are on the same side...

Raidose · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Raidose** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 2:23 pm

Yep, different Clans. Though I won't likely be trying to start shit because of my delicate political situation. And EG, it wasn't the looks, it was..... well, mainly the wording. I mean

"though his overall personality is one of a coming storm, calm and quiet one moment before its full fury is unleashed"

Versus

"Ni'Charak's personality is like that of a storm cloud or a dying fire, cold and black on the outside, but once stirred the sudden blast of heat could melt your face off"

And there are a lot more. It wasn't the looks, in fact that was one of the few things that I can honestly say was different, with the exception of the enclosed mandibles but let's bet honest, the Pred in the first movie looked so much better than his predecessors. Advances in technology be damned, that face/head-mask had more emotion in it than AVPR's wolf mask. You could see his eye brows raise and lower, the head wasn't a fucking Mardi gras prop, the mandibles looked like they could fit under the mask, and even his eyes looked better. when Dutch is on his back shouting "Come here! I'm Here! Kill me! Come on!" after the pred finds the spikes, you can really just read the expression of "Do I look that fucking stupid to you?" It made the movie.

Tylerjohnny1 · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **Tylerjohnny1** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:33 pm

Ok, I've been thinking this for a while and now I need to speak my mind about something, namely, the super predators. I think they are just a stupid creation, and they are based off of the Hish. In my opinion, they shouldn't be a playable race at all. In fact, they shouldn't even be considered canon. The only other race of predator should be Hish, and that should be a very limited race. And if someone plays a Hish, that war gland is a bitch. So please, no Super Preds.

Another thing, while ranks differ from clan to clan, veteran isn't a rank. A suggested ranking list would be: Unblooded, Youngblood, Blooded, Hunter, Warrior, Elite, Clan-chieftain, Adjudicator.

And Endwar...your predator soloed an alien queen...in melee. That is damn near impossible. An adjudicator maybe, but idk about a veteran, which im considering an elite.

So please consider these changes for the best of the rp. This is only meant to make the experience more enjoyable, thank you for your time and consideration.

R.T.M.X. · **Tips:** 0.00 INK by **R.T.M.X.** on Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:51 pm

Actually, Veteran is an actual rank (and possible title) in the Yautja caste system. The same goes with Elder, Discmaster, Spearmaster, etcetera.

While I somewhat agree with the idea regarding the Super Predator and Hish, but I don't really care much about them, as there should be few of them.

As for soloing a queen, keep in mind that it's a sample of how he write, and isn't shouldn't be part of the character's backstory regarding this RP.

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