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Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

a part of “Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi”, a fictional universe by QueLights.

Sequel to the original Beasts of Burden, this story takes it's place in the center of Germany. OKARI has returned again, creating new and more dangerous prototypes. With the help of the Beta, Omega and Alpha must fight against a new force.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby QueLights on Thu Jul 12, 2012 6:46 pm

Tell me about it. I apologize for the delay, I'm working on the first post right now. Today has been damn long.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Sup /b/ros of page four..

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Alright, first post is up. The first half is just the intro, explaining the "birthing process" of the Psi. You only have to get into the second part; the meeting at the commons. I mean, if you wanna do the first part, I'm not stopping you.. but.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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My cute little Leliana~ And..Murderous Charlotte.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Done. Done. And finished. That beautiful post took me forever but tis perfect. :)
"A stupid man’s report of what a clever man says can never be accurate, because he unconciously translates what he hears into something he can understand."
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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Finished dat post. Kinda short compared to everyone else, but I think it gets the point across.

Did I mention that Michael doesn't like OKARI?
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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Ah, Zetta. Your read saved my eyes. Was nice, too.

We have some pretty talented writers in this role play. I'll start the journal entries tomorrow. I'mma go pass out now.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Hazezon wrote:My cute little Leliana~ And..Murderous Charlotte.


I'm torn between sympathy and horror, but Charlotte is frightening indeed :P. Also, seems security is as complacent as per usual in these situations.
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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Blazezon on Fri Jul 13, 2012 3:51 am

It was pretty goddamn obvious pretty quick that Leliana was a failure, which means she'd be sent off for destruction no matter what. I can't see Okari fussing to get her gunned down while risking more men, when they're just gunna file her off and kill her anyway. Besides, to a small extent murder is exactly what they want. They'd wanted to turn Leliana's dog-phobia into a battle-frenzy trigger. I guess it worked half-assed because it sends Charlotte into a mindless rage, making it all part of the tests. I would not wanna work for Okari...Even though I bet the hazard pay is sweet as fuck.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Hahaha, indeed, although if I was manager I'd have to stress there where probably safer ways to test that trigger without killing employees. No doubt being an OKARI scientist would suck though. I enjoyed the read nonetheless, looking forwards to what other madness both of them get upto :D

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Baha, well thank you o:

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Submitted the profile. Also, I have no idea how the font got so damn small. If it helps, I copied the code into a Word document and worked on it from there.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Well xD and f you read the original BoB, OKARI could give less shits about their employees getting killed. Jantec went around tossing nurses about, and they simply hired more. They're a pretty damn wealthy organization. However, the whole point of the Beta prototypes was to throw out the ones like Charlotte, who couldn't function correctly. So I suppose in terms, they're getting better about it. Even still, a couple of men with guns couldn't stop a Psi.

And Gamer, I'll take a look at it right now.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby QueLights on Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:03 pm

Alright, so far these characters have been introduced:

Zakhar
Vein
Leliana/Charlotte
Anrie
Michael
Francis
William

Alphas and Omegas, (Except for maybe Cyrus and Jantec) will come into the story a bit later. We're still waiting on a post from slcam and tilt, but they may have to time lapse, because I don't want to make everyone wait.

Edit: Just glanced at the Featured Roleplays list and we happened to be at the top with a lovely 1.2k words per. post. Also, working on the journal right now. I won't start updating it until after we're past intros. No sense in describing every character when it's done so perfectly already.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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I'll be honest with you, I've no clue where to start off an intro post! XD

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Sorry about that, making a post is my first priority today.
I will get one up as soon as I can.
How I feel when writing a post...
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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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We'll make an opening for you, Gamer. You may just have to sit tight until Jantec and Cyrus show up.

No worries, Slcam.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Oopps. I just realised that the first part of my post got cut off. It is up now though.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

Tips: 0.00 INK Postby Zetta on Sat Jul 14, 2012 12:27 am

Alright, since I'm gonna be gone for Saturday and Sunday (I'll be arriving in the evening), I'm gonna leave Michael in the hands of Haze for today's post and possibly tomorrow's.

I'll be back for poasting on Sunday.

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Re: Beasts of Burden: Prototype Psi

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Ah, I actually probably won't be able to post Saturday, either, unless it's relatively early (which would require things to respond to by then) D: I'll get back late Sunday as well.

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