Mine took place in the dubious alleyways of the OneManga RPing forums, where oppressive moderation and a lack of enforcement for proper language skills resulted in the death of most RPs. I was involved in a Naruto RP (don't start) in which I had taken a hiatus for a moment. Wanting to make my return with a bang, I pulled out all stops and requisitioned a friend's NPC (with his permission, of course) and created this:
A lone figure figure stood in the distance, blazing eyes observing the battle between the man named Hondu Omako and the two junior shinobi. Unmoving, he watched as Omako showered the area with chakra rounds, some of them passing dangerously close to where he stood. However, he paid little heed to this, certain that he would not be harmed by them. As Omako continued to bombard his opponents, the figure knew he would have to act if the ninjas were to live. Looking towards the sky, he spread his arms wide, and muttered two words.
"Shoushi Taiyougan."
His eyes no longer burned red, but a pure blinding white. Pupils reverted from light to dark. Overhead, the sun's light slowly gave way to the moon, and the two celestial bodies aligned together to form a solar eclipse, a dark circle where the sun once shined, and a mighty halo of light flaring outwards. Everyone within the vicinity, including Omako, stopped to marvel at the phenomenon. At that precise moment, the figure stepped forward, revealing himself to Omako and anyone observing them. Just as the Ash shinobi was about to react, the figure muttered yet another word.
"Burn."
And without warning, Omako's entire body burst into dark blue flames. The man shrieked in agony, writhing about and firing chakra rounds in every direction as he struggled to futilely extinguish the inferno scorching his flesh. In response, the figure merely waved his hand, and the chakra rounds caught fire and died out before they could cause any damage. Soon, Omako fell to the ground, his charred body testament to his killer's power. He turned towards the boy hiding in the bushes.
"Chow, why the hell are you naked? Put some clothes on, you're embarrassing the girls," chided Kieru, a smile on his face.
Earlier, in the hospital...
Floating... drifting across the sky... Kieru looked around himself. All around him, thick clouds obscured his view... was he dead? Is this Heaven? No, he couldn't be in Heaven... but then where? The clouds suddenly parted, and he found himself high in the air, countries and oceans visible in the distance below him. On both of his sides, two unspeakably beautiful women stood, one clad in deep red wargear, ornate flaming patterns the motif for her clothing. The other was dressed in an immeasurably pristine blue kimono, her long dark hair tied within a moon headdress. Kieru instantly recognized the pair as Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi, the goddesses of the sun and the moon.
"Inheritor of the Taiyougan," Amaterasu addressed Kieru, "You have been gifted with the eyes of the sun. They fill you with passion, bravery, rage, and have allowed you to excel as a shinobi. And, when you were robbed of your sight, the energetic sun had faded away, and the tranquil moon risen in its place."
"Inheritor of the Taiyougan," Tsukuyomi spoke, continuing where her sister had stopped, "Within your unconsciousness, induced by the injuries you had suffered, your hateful personality, fueled by the sun within you, had been erased by the rising of the moon. Your being felt peace once more, and you reverted to who you once were, the child who smiled freely and with genuine happiness before that fateful day when both your parents were killed."
"However," this time, the two deities declared in unison, "When the shinobi Kajin Sinix tended to your wounds, he successfully healed your right eye, partially returning your vision and consequently, rekindling the flames of the sun within you. This meant that you are now imbued with both the forces of the sun and the moon. Your kekkei genkai has evolved in such a way that none sharing your bloodline could ever have imagined possible. Inheritor of the Taiyougan, you carry with you now, the might of the eclipse; the Shoushi Taiyougan!
Kieru bolted straight into a sitting position, cold sweat pouring down his panting face. He suddenly knew three things: he could see out his right eye, he only felt a fraction of the destructive malice he once carried, and Chow Vang was in trouble. After hastily buying some clothes, Kieru dashed off towards the Ash Village, fervently hoping he wasn't too late.
A post which I feel is my best to date. Unfortunately, the RP in question died two pages later, due to a new mod-sanctioned Naruto RP being formed (which I didn't care to join, and eventually died anyway). The post can be found in the middle of this page. In here you will also find someone who I feel is the worst RPer to ever find his way onto the Internet.